Hi again. well i don't really know where this came from...but there are so many revival stories gone awry i thought I'd do my own. this is just the prologue so I'll leave it till next chapter maybe for you to find out who died.
Ed: what?! you won't even tell me
Al: it is one of us right?
Ed: of course it is, she's not creative enough to make anyone else a main character.
"Don't…promise me you won't…do…anything…stupid"
"No! Don't say that, you're gonna be fine! You can't leave me!"
"…no…I'm sorry…just…promise…"
"But…I, you can't die! Too many people need you, I need you!"
"Please…It's not…not like I…want…to die, but…I am…" he struggled to take another breath "I'm sorry…I love you" he said with his last breath as his eyes slid shut and death claimed him.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the other boy wailed as the young blonde's body became limp and cold in his arms. Tears flowed freely down his face as he sobbed into the still chest of his dead brother. After he finally ran out of tears and sat up looking forlornly at his brothers pale face. 'promise me you won't… do… anything… stupid' the echo of his brothers dieing wish rang in his ears as he brushed some stray hairs out of his brothers face. "I'm sorry brother" he said as he made up his mind.
He gently laid the body on the ground and drew a transmutation circle around the body. When he was done he carefully inspected the array and with only a moment of hesitation placed his hands on the edge of the array.
The reaction started glowing a bright gold and he had to close his eyes as the light grew too bright. He began to have second thoughts about this plan as he wondered when the toll would be taken and he would likely die, but he pushed those thoughts out of his mind as it was too late anyways. Slowly the light died down and he looked around.
"I'm alive?" he asked the room blinking to regain his night vision "but…does that mean!" he said panicked as he peered through the smoke to see what had happened.
yes it is short, but this is just the prologue, more soon till then rate and review.
Ed: tell me who died!
no
Ed: tell me dammit!
nope
Ed: gah! tell me!
next chapter has more hints guaranteed if not an outright answer you wait just like the readers.
Ed: shouldn't you be working on other fan fictions?
it's called writers block, i will find a way to make you suffer soon.
