4:19 PM 4/25/01
Hey I'm kind of new and i wrote this story a wile ago and i just wanted to let u guys look at it and tell me what u think. ^-^ enjoy!
The Enchanted Story
A long, long time ago in a place not seen by a human before called Himafa lived an elf called Toonaka with eyes as blue as the clear water, hair as gold as the sun, and a crystal instead of a heart. And on the other side of Himafa was an evil warlock beast elf. He had no passion for any of the others. He wanted to destroy ALL! But he didn't, he only destroyed ones who opposed him. His name was….Seforoth. On the other hand Toonaka didn't have to worry about him now since she lived on the other side of Himafa , for now. Toonaka lived with her mother, Marlene, and her young sister Luna who was only seven years old. Each morning Toonaka and Luna went to a forest called the Calmed forest. They would always just sit down and wonder around peacefully.
One weekly day later (a week and a day in Himafala language) Toonaka and Luna as usual, went to the calm forest were everything is quiet and relaxing. And once again they sat down wondering around peacfully. Then Luna stood up and said, "I'm not sure why but today is such a great day for me………..maybe because it's a very refreshing forest and it just makes every one so, so happy and"." Well then Luna, I'm not to sure if this is a good time or a bad time to tell you something that happen in our family a wile ago". "All right Toonaka, I'm listening". " Well, this is very hard but hear it goes, a couple years ago, before you were born we had a sister and her name was Aries. She had beautiful brown hair, sweet green eyes, and she would always wear a lovely pink dress, and always carry a staff with her were ever she went". Oh Toonaka why are you crying?! should i stop?" "Oh no, I'm sorry I didn't mean to! Continue.... " Now, where was I? Oh yes, she would always carry a staff with her. And she was very brave too. And that's what caused the problem, she was just to brave. She tried going after Seforoth because back then he was taking control of everybody and someone had to do something!
... but she failed. She tried using everything she had in her. Her magic, her weapon attacks and her gf's (summons demons). She tried every single thing she could but he was just to powerful for her. I'm very sorry you never got to see her. We never told you earlier because you were to little and you wouldn't understand but now, well, you know, Luna." "Sniff, sniff, why did this have to happen? …………. Can we at least see her grave?" " Yes, anything for you."
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To Be Continued:
Hey I'm kind of new and i wrote this story a wile ago and i just wanted to let u guys look at it and tell me what u think. ^-^ enjoy!
The Enchanted Story
A long, long time ago in a place not seen by a human before called Himafa lived an elf called Toonaka with eyes as blue as the clear water, hair as gold as the sun, and a crystal instead of a heart. And on the other side of Himafa was an evil warlock beast elf. He had no passion for any of the others. He wanted to destroy ALL! But he didn't, he only destroyed ones who opposed him. His name was….Seforoth. On the other hand Toonaka didn't have to worry about him now since she lived on the other side of Himafa , for now. Toonaka lived with her mother, Marlene, and her young sister Luna who was only seven years old. Each morning Toonaka and Luna went to a forest called the Calmed forest. They would always just sit down and wonder around peacefully.
One weekly day later (a week and a day in Himafala language) Toonaka and Luna as usual, went to the calm forest were everything is quiet and relaxing. And once again they sat down wondering around peacfully. Then Luna stood up and said, "I'm not sure why but today is such a great day for me………..maybe because it's a very refreshing forest and it just makes every one so, so happy and"." Well then Luna, I'm not to sure if this is a good time or a bad time to tell you something that happen in our family a wile ago". "All right Toonaka, I'm listening". " Well, this is very hard but hear it goes, a couple years ago, before you were born we had a sister and her name was Aries. She had beautiful brown hair, sweet green eyes, and she would always wear a lovely pink dress, and always carry a staff with her were ever she went". Oh Toonaka why are you crying?! should i stop?" "Oh no, I'm sorry I didn't mean to! Continue.... " Now, where was I? Oh yes, she would always carry a staff with her. And she was very brave too. And that's what caused the problem, she was just to brave. She tried going after Seforoth because back then he was taking control of everybody and someone had to do something!
... but she failed. She tried using everything she had in her. Her magic, her weapon attacks and her gf's (summons demons). She tried every single thing she could but he was just to powerful for her. I'm very sorry you never got to see her. We never told you earlier because you were to little and you wouldn't understand but now, well, you know, Luna." "Sniff, sniff, why did this have to happen? …………. Can we at least see her grave?" " Yes, anything for you."
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To Be Continued: