OK, here is the plan I am going to revise the story and I will post the chapters on hopefully a weakly basses. At most the longest it should take is a month, and if I am grounded will try to tell you with out further ado, here's released.
I don't own Adventure Time duh
Released
"PB ,Marceline what are you doing." Finn said as a bouquet of wildflowers fell from his hands. He and Jake had just left for a couple of minutes to collect them from Wildberry Princess and then finally confess his love to her.
The world blurred as tears fell from his face. In the distance he heard Jake gasp " Oh my glob." Princess BubbleGum jumped up from Marceline's lap. The well groomed princess had her gum hair hanging loosely while her crown was dangling on half of her head. Her clothes were hanging off her frame. "Finn it's not what it looks like, I was testing something and I needed Marceline's help." She said as she tried to make herself decent.
Marceline was shifting uncomfortably in the air. The Vampire Queen was embarrassed , " Finn you weren't supposed to be here, I thought I told Jake to keep you busy for a while." She was now giving a death glare to Jake. Who stammered "We wasn't suppose to be back here so early ,but..but Wild Berry was busy."
Finn looked toward his lifelong friend and his brother. " Jake you knew about this and you didn't tell me." Finn's voice was quiet, his whole body shook with anger. Jake looked his brother in the eyes, they were lifeless and the spark in there was gone. " Finn I couldn't tell you cause it was a royal promise." But Finn wasn't hearing any of it he took one last look at PB and ran out the door.
"Finn!" yelled Jake he was about to chase after him when Marceline grabbed his shoulder. " Leave the baby alone so he can cool off." Jake turned shock about how she can say something like that. Then he saw tears in her eyes, the blood dripped all the way to her chin. Then he looked at PB who was staring out the window. Tears was also flowing down her face. "My knight has left me." PB sounded so sad like she just lost someone dear to her.
"I have to apologize." The Princess said suddenly. She quickly ran to the door calling Peppermint Butler to get a horse ready. " PB it'll take too long lets take Jake." Marceline hopped on Jake's back and pulled up PB. " You ladies ready," They both gave a nod " , Then hold on." Jake hopped the candy walls and bounded after Finn's scent.
In the distance wolves smelt an intruder in their territory. It was a smell few still remembered what it was. The oldest in the group ordered the search and capture of a human.
Well there is chapter 1 send me any reviews and when the story gets to a certain part, please say if my Oc is a Mary Sue because I hate those and I would like to make a good character.
