Ok so here is my second story posted. At first I wasn't sure about putting up stories that are not complete yet but I want to see if reviews might encourage me to complete my stories sooner. So here it is. Yes, this is a story of princes and all that fairytale stuff, however it (hopefully) will not be like others that you have read because I try to use only my own ideas.
Summary: There once lived four princes of four different countries. The youngest of them had just turned eighteen and all the princes were finally given the throne that rightfully belonged to them. They all had there differences but they did have one same thought. Their castles were way overdue for a set of new servants.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, only the plot of my story. =)
Prologue
This is a story about four princes and four ordinary girls. It started many years ago on an ordinary day. There lived four royal families in four different Countries. The Fire Country, the Water Country, the Earth Country, and the Wind Country. The Princes all knew each other for their parents became friends while they were signing peace treaties for their countries years back.
Over the years, Uzumaki Minato fell ill to a fatal disease that his wife had before she passed away a year before. Eventually he too consumed to the illness and deceased months later. His one and only son Uzumaki Naruto, became the crowned prince of the Water Country at the age of 15.
Months after Minato's Death, Uchiha Fugaku and his wife, Uchiha Mikoto were traveling to a nearby village when they were attacked and murdered. The crown was then handed to their eldest son Uchiha Itachi. A week later Itachi ran from the castle to some unknown location. No one knew the real reason as to why he left so different rumors started to spread. Some believed that he ran away because becoming King was to stressful. Others believed that he ran away because he didn't ever want to be King in the first place. When he left, the crown was automatically handed down to the second and youngest Uchiha Sasuke. Therefore Uchiha Sasuke became the crowned prince of the Fire Country also at the young age of 15.
For Naruto and Sasuke ruling at such a young age was against the law so the elders of the country of Fire and Water were to make the decisions until the crowned princes became of the age to rule, eighteen. Until then, they were to go on the trips to sign peace treaties with other countries. They went together to the countries and became good friends along the way.
As for the other two Countries, Nara Shikaku, the King of the Earth Country decided it was a lot of work being a King and he would retire early and give the crown to his only son Nara Shikamaru, when he turned the age of eighteen.
The last King, Lord Hyuuga Hiashi also decided to retire when his nephew turned eighteen due to the fact that he was the eldest and only close male relative. Lord Hiashi was accepted to join the council of elders for the Wind Country when his nephew became of age.
The council of elders of the four countries heard about how the princes of their countries were all to become King at the age of eighteen. To make things easier for the princes, the council decided that when the youngest of the four princes, Uzumaki Naruto, turned eighteen on the tenth day of the tenth month they would move out of the castle but refuse to let them have full responsibility until they turned twenty-three. The council decided that that when Naruto turned eighteen, they would give the princes a chance to get used to becoming King without giving them the full responsibilities of one. They would give them a chance to roam the secret rooms of their castles and to do what they want with the money they had knowing that money wasn't a problem for them. The council also decided that until the age of twenty-three they themselves would take care of the paperwork since that was the most challenging part for a King. Other than that the princes were free to do whatever they pleased.
This Story starts a couple weeks after Uzumaki Naruto's eighteenth birthday. The elders have just moved out of the castles including Hyuuga Hiashi who was just accepted to become an official elder and Nara Shikaku who decided to go to some unknown land with his lovely wife where the sun always shines and clouds line up in the sky everyday. Before reading this lovely fairytale one needs to know the personalities of these unparticular princes.
First, the oldest of the princes is the prince of the Wind Country, Hyuuga Neji. Born on July 3rd, his father, Hyuuga Hizashi died protecting his Uncle, Lord Hyuuga Hiashi from a surprise attack. His Mother and Aunt are long deceased. Neji has never been talked back to before (unless someone is answering a question) because everyone in the castle is afraid of him or what he might do to them if they talk back. He is now nineteen and very smug that the elders have left and he is trusted with more responsibility.
Next is the prince of the Fire Country, Uchiha Sasuke. Born on July 23rd His parents were ambushed and murdered. Like Neji, he is not a people person. Though he like to talk, he's very aware of the fact that the younger servants think he is hot and messes around by smiling and winking at them every once in a while only to cure his boredom. No one knows of this attitude except for the servants, but the younger servants are still oblivious, not wanting to believe that the prince would really act like that. Everyone outside the castle knows him as a human ice cube. He is now eighteen and is pleased that the annoying old "things" have left the castle and won't be bothering him by telling him what to do, how to act, and what words he should and shouldn't say. They weren't any help in his opinion anyway.
After that was the prince of the Earth Country, Nara Shikamaru. Born on September 22nd, his mom and dad are currently alive but retired and living in possibly another country for he forgot to ask specifically where his parents were going and thinks it's not worth his time to try and find out. Shikamaru is a very lazy genius. He is now eighteen and couldn't care less that the council has moved out of the castle. However, he is glad that his mother has moved out for she was getting kind of loud and he still wishes his dad will come home take his troublesome job back and ask for him to move out instead. Though, the chances of that happening is zero.
Finally, the youngest of the princes is the prince of the Water Country, Uzumaki Naruto. Born on October 10th, his parents died of a fatal disease that has long passed. Naruto isn't the smartest of the princes but is definitely the most stubborn. He promises that he will become the best King in the whole world. He is now eighteen and is ecstatic that the "old farts" (that always criticize his actions and decisions) are finally gone. He is also psyched that no one can tell him where he can and can't place a ramen shop anymore.
Some things these princes have in common other than being princes is: 1.) The only servants they except are females. 2.) They all decided to get more servants. 3.) They will each learn that some things you can only get by effort. 4.) They may not know it, but they decided to get servants from little towns in their own countries on the same day.
This is where the four ordinary girls come in and this is also where our story begins.
That's it for this chapter. Hopefully it will get more enjoyable as the story progresses. =)
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