Okay, please remember that this is my first fanfic and that I could use your helping hand….
Disclaimer: I don't in any way own Disney Pixar's CARS. Well, unless you count an iPod with the soundtrack on it….
"I did it! I did it!" Laura cheered, crossing the finish line and driving up to her dad. "You were amazing!" he couldn't believe what he had just seen.Lightningskidded to a halt in front of them. "How on earth did you do THAT?" Lightning panted, "The last time I tried that, I hit the cacti patch before I realized I missed it!" he stomped a tire on the ground. Laura simply blushed. It was like a dream, and the gloomy clouds above her faded way…
Well, almost faded… The wind screamed and drew billows of dust from the ground. Trees shuddered and snapped. Debrisflew everywhere. "Run!" Laura yelled. Her voice was barely audible above the wind. Her dad just stood there in too much shock to answer. It was then that Lightning picked up the pace and dragged him to the center of Willie's Butte. "Laura, what are you-" His question wasn't needed. She placed a tire on a button shaped rock, or rather, a rock shaped button, and a door opened. The two pulled him inside…
End of chapter one. Please review... One review and I will add chapter two.