devildog452. Apr 8. PM message
Great. And I just read the story about eris and discord and found it great. Think you could make two more about ahuizotl and his female counterpart and King sombra and his counterpart?
Toxic: Well, time for the second half of this baby to be born!
Discord: That just sounds plain wrong.
Toxic: Uuuugh! Discord, why are you still here? Frida's been healthy for three full weeks now!
Frida: SQUUU -Get Discord- UUUUAWK!
Discord: Did you hear that?
Toxic: Hear what?
Discord: Frida! She just whispered she was gonna get me!
Toxic: Discord that's impossible. Frida only squawks and yells, she can't legitimately make a sentence.
Frida: SQUUUU -Seriously, watch your back- UUUUAWK!
Discord: SEE! She did it again!
Toxic: Oh don't be paranoid, that's my thing. Speaking of which, had another three panic attacks recently.
Discord: That bad?
Toxic: Discord… you have no idea. My hands and feet and arms go all numb and tingly along with the back of my head and this time my chin too. It's terrifying not being able to move twice in the span if 15 minutes.
Frida: Squawk?
Toxic: It's ok Frida. It just means I have to keep up with my doctor's appointments and therapy sessions. Back to square one, I guess…
Discord: Toxic?
Toxic: Whatever, I don't want to bring everyone down before the story. I'll be fine, eventually… Roll the clip Frida…
Frida: Squawk…
Two dark blue figures enter the redecorated room of the old temple made to look like a bedroom.
"Well didn't that just go estupendo!" Atotoztli said sarcastically as she shook off dirt and fallen rock from her coat.
Ahuizotl growled, "Well it wasn't MY fault the alter collapsed!"
"Oh?" Atotoztli said, turning back around toward him, "than whose fault was it? I wasn't the one who tied up the captives right next to the alter!"
"Oh, so it's MY fault?!"
"YES! It is! Because it isn't MY fault!"
Ay payita mia, guardate la poesia
Guardate la alegria pa'ti
Ahuizotl growled at her, turning and heading for the bed instead. Atotoztli huffed at him and exited through a door to the connecting bathe. From there. Ahuizotl heard water begin running, coming to the conclusion that his counter partner was preparing a bath.
A few minutes more and the water stopped. The treasure thief started closing his eyes, mind drifting back toward his most recent defeat by his nemesis Daring Do and her own male counterpart, Daring Dan. He had originally thought that Atotoztli and he combing forces would make them unstoppable. But of course that meddlesome mare found herself a stumbling stallion to join her efforts and now they were still behind.
'Uh mmm…'
No pido que todos los días sean de sol
No pido que todos los viernes sean de fiesta
Tampoco te pido que vuelvas rogando perdón
Si lloras con los ojos secos
Y hablando de ella
He opened his eyes, sitting up and looking around for the source of the noise. Nothing. So he laid back down and closed his eyes once again, thinking of all the ways Atotoztli had messed up his plan this time.
'Ah! Oh… mmm…'
He sat back up, looking closer this time. These little moans were coming from somewhere, but where? He looked toward the open doorway that lead to the bathe. Could they be coming from... Ahuizotl got up from the bed, making his way toward the doorway. From there he heard the tiny whimpers coming from the bathe's direction. All very feminine whimpers.
'Nnngh… Ahui… Ahuizotl…'
That was… Atotoztli… moaning… his name. Was she… possibly… pleasuring herself while thinking of him?
He took a whiff of the air, a pungent smell filled his nostrils. Thick, hot, and very enticing. Almost an addictive scent of flowers, salt, and pure lust all in one.
Ay amor me duele tanto
This smell, so alluring. He had to follow it. He had to find its source.
He travelled to the door of the bathe, the very place Atotoztli was…
Ahuizotl could put two and two together. That smell, the moans, his name. It was clear as day. Atotoztli was in heat, and she was trying to get relief.
Me duele tanto
'Ahui… r-right… right there…'
She was pleasing herself while thinking of him. Ahuizotl felt the smallest bit of pride at this discovery. Having his female counterpart in the throes of passion at the thought of him did make him smirk. He couldn't contain his curiosity. He had to look.
Peeking over the side of the door, silent as a mouse, he tried seeing the tub. And he most certainly did.
Que te fueras sin decir a dónde
Ay amor fue una tortura...
Perderte
'OH! Ahuizotl… s-sí-sí! Oh! R-right there! Bueno!'
Atotoztli was in the stone carved out tub, water hot from the heated rocks underneath, moaning and rocking in the water. Her one arm grasped the edge of the tub tightly, holding on for dear life. Her other arm was down on her underside, lower, fondling her clit in the hot water. Her forehead was drenched in both bath water and sweat, eyes scrunched tightly. Her face contorted in effort and pleasure. And her tail-hand, busy digging its fingers into her exotic dark blue flower. The extra appendage being used at full power to please herself while the smell of her arousal filled the room along with her moans, the attempts to conceal them failing more and more by the second.
Ahuizotl felt heat creep into two places in his body. And one place refused to let the heat go. He was peeping, on himself, as a female. This is so wrong.
"Ahui-Baby! Ohhh… ngh! Sí! Sí! Duro! Duro! I love it!"
He could feel his tail hand reach below his waist for his male-hood. Slowly touching himself as he watched Atotoztli rocking her hips in the water to the thought of him.
Yo sé que no he sido un santo
Pero lo puedo arreglar, amor
The female in question was unaware of her partner watching and jerking-off to her display. Her eyes were closed tight, imagining her tail's hand was really Ahuizotl's cock. Ruff and greedy he takes everything he wants from her without second guessing. He grabs her arms, holding her down while he rails her. Dirtying the virtue of her flower. Taking, giving, his breath hits her ear just right and she moans.
"Ahui- Ahui-Baby! Más, más! Please!"
She holds him closer to her as he grips her tighter. His arms so strong and firm. He rests his palms on her firm rear, her cheeks blush red. He holds her hips in his hands, giving them a playful squeeze and dropping her down onto his hard cock.
"Oh Gods! Más, más! More Ahui! More! I want to be one with you!"
No sólo de pan vive el hombre
Y no de excusas vivo yo
Ahuizotl had to bite his lip to keep himself from yelling. He continues jerking to the sight of Atotoztli in the tub. She begins thrashing in the water, her hips bucking on instinct as her tail hand digs into her pussy deeper, rubbing at her clit periodically as her forepaw switches to grabbing and squeezing her ass.
Moaning desperately for him to let her release, Atotoztli grinds her hips into her imaginary lover. Their fur warms up from the friction between them. Navy blue against navy blue as he thrusts into her shaking form.
Ahuizotl sees in his head himself grabbing her and getting into the hot water himself. His hands gliding over her smooth fur and feeling her heart beat under his palms.
Sólo de errores se aprende
Y hoy sé que es tuyo mi corazón
She can feel him speeding up. His thrusts becoming deeper and faster by the second. Unable to make out coherent sentences anymore, Atotoztli releases feminine moans in a string of harmony through the echoing walls of the bathroom. He picks her up in his arms, his lips smash against hers in a heated tongue battle for dominance. He easily wins out, she enjoys being the submissive far more than she ever suspected.
He grabs her wrists and pulls her into his lap, bouncing her.
Her mind so foggy.
Mejor te guardas todo eso
A otro perro con ese hueso
Y nos decimos adios
He can't hold out much longer. His will is being melted away as he drives into her deeper and deeper. Her tight walls hug him so closely they strive to keep him inside of her.
The tightening in his loins begins to betray him. His balls ache for release. To fill her, make her his and only his for the rest of their lives. A primal need to claim her as his mate for the rest of time.
No puedo pedir que el invierno perdone a un rosal
No puedo pedir a los olmos que entreguen peras
No puedo pedirle lo eterno a un simple mortal
Y andar arrojando a los cerdos miles de perlas
She screams, her needs being fulfilled as she feel her juices leak from her flower. Her blush spreading as she feels him continually thrust into her. Their tongues continuing the deadly dance of love as she moans into his lips in passion. He caresses her head, running his fingers through her hair to feel its soft silkiness.
Ay amor me duele tanto, me duele tanto
Que no creas más en mis promesas
Ahuizotl grunts as he continues his thrusts. His mind suddenly exploding in light as her walls constrict around him, aiming to milk him for every last drop.
He lets out a mighty roar as he explodes inside of Atotoztli, filling her to the brim with his cum. Each swell of his semen inside of her womb sends another blast of pleasure through her body. She shivers as she feels her body grow hotter and fuller at the same time. Her legs grow numb under the bliss.
He exits her body with cum splattered all over their loins.
When both open their eyes…
…they see each other staring back at them.
Ay amor
Both stare at the other, immobilized. They gaze down ward to see their tails' hands by the other.
This whole dream each of them had been going through was actually half true. Atotoztli had her tail hand gripped around Ahuizotl's cock, and he had his poised right at her pussy soaked in his juices. They didn't move, whether out of fear or embarrassment or probably both. Neither could speak nor hide their blushing faces. They were both there, in the tub, drenched in water and their own fluids as well as their partner's with no way out.
"We- uh I-I," Ahuizotl tried forming a sentence, but he failed miserably.
Es una tortura
Atotoztli did the only thing she could. Her face rushed forward to meet his.
Their lips met harshly as she smashed her face against his. A primal urge coursing through her veins to mate and create new life.
Ahuizotl grabbed her by her wrists, forcing her back away from him and disconnecting their lips. "Atotoztli! I cannot take advantage of you."
"Wh-what do- do you mean?" she panted.
"I could smell your arousal. I know you're in heat."
Perderte
She reeled back from him at the mention of her 'condition'. Embarrassed and ashamed she was allowing her hormones to have total control of her. She was supposed to have more self-control than this. But being around Ahuizotl changed everything. Constantly being around a male while she was writhing in aching heat with a need to fuck. A need to have something fuck her.
Yo sé que no he sido un santo
Pero lo puedo arreglar, amor
"So you- don't want to have sex with me?"
Ahuizotl backed up as Atotoztli scooted forward in the liquid mess around them. "Well I- No that's not- this is not the point of the converSATION!" He yelped as Atotoztli jumped him, hopping onto his chest and pushing his down into the water. Splashing and thrashing to get her off before she smashed her lips into his once again, trying to force her tongue into his maw.
He could feel her tongue licking at his teeth, pleading for him to let her into his mouth and allow their tongues to dance once again. She cut off his oxygen. He was getting water and spilled cum into his fur and hair. She grasped his arms and refused to let go. His will broke, betraying him, and his teeth parted to give her access to his mouth and their tongues began the heated battle for dominance.
No sólo de pan vive el hombre
Y no de excusas vivo yo
He held her sides and ripped her off of him, again, gasping for breath as she panted in his face.
"Why?"
Atotoztli kept breathing heavily as she looked at him questioningly. "Why what?"
"Why are you attracted to me?"
She thought about it. Why was it him she wanted to mate with for life? Mating wasn't something their culture took lightly, so why was she choosing him?
Sólo de errores se aprende
Y hoy sé que es tuyo mi corazón
"You are myigual," she responded. "You treat me as not a monstruo, but as your reina. Your dama."
He put his hands on her hips, she positioned herself more comfortably on his lap in cross legged Indian position.
"When you see me you don't run, or coware, or fear me. You see me as… another you. A señorita, a señora. You treat me like… me."
Mejor te guardas todo eso
A otro perro con ese hueso
Y nos decimos adios
Ahuizotl rested his hand on the back of Atotoztli's head, his fingers entwining in her strands of black hair. "Mi amor," he whispered. Their lips met again, this time more hesitantly and slowly as they delicatly touched in a kiss. Atotoztli closed her eyes as she felt his hands drift to her waist and pull her up, propping her above his waist.
She gasped as she felt him grasp her rear end and give a teasing squeeze. "Ahhh, Ahui… make me yours," she moaned.
He gyrated his hips into her lower waist, grinding them into her moist lips. She moaned, feeling his… tool rub against her pink lips. A warm, burning throbbing sending volts of pleasure through her spine. She whined in need.
"Ahui," she breathed heavily "please… don't tease me."
He growled at her sensually, "Are you needy, mi amor?"
She moaned, "Oh sí! Claim me Ahuizotl! Make me bear your young!"
'THRUST!'
No te vayas, no te vayas
Oye negrita mira, no te rajes
De lunes a viernes tienes mi amor
Déjame el sábado a mi que es mejor
Atotoztli screamed as Ahuizotl pierced her, tearing her virgin barrier. Like she remembered earlier, their kind takes mating very seriously. They mate once, with whomever they wish to be with for the rest of their lives. So this was her very first mating and the only partner she wishes to have.
Her eyes scrunched tightly shut as tears built up in the corners of her eyes. Her virgin blood leaked from her stuffed fem-hood and down Ahuizotl's cock. She wrapped her arms tightly around him, feeling him do the same as he shushed her whimpers. "Shhh, I know. But this will be the only time I ever hurt you. Just wait."
He ran his hands over her shapely body in effort to ease her pain. Her paws were dug into his back, claws sinking into his skin and causing him to grit his teeth.
They stayed in the position. Letting Atotoztli become used to the fullness of her fem-hood and waiting for the pain to cease. Eventually, it felt like a huge tidal wave of pleasure suddenly crashed into her wall of pain and washed it away. The stinging, burning pain that shot through her suddenly transformed into the feeling of being whole, being full. And she was most certainly full. She released her claws from her mates back with a sigh of relief.
"Feeling better chica?" Ahuizotl purred into her ear.
She grumbled, but he bounced her once in his lap and she lost her concentration on being mad. Lost to the sudden jolt of pleasure that came with the little thrust of his hips, causing the water around them to ripple.
Oye mi negra no me castigues más
Porque allá afuera sin ti no tengo paz
Yo solo soy un hombre muy arrepentido
Soy como el ave que vuelve a su nido
"Oh! Ahui-baby! More! More! I want more!" She hopped in his lap, trying to ride his cock while in his lap.
He did not wait to please his mate. He thrust his hips again and put his hands on Atotoztli's plump little ass. He matched his thrusts in sync with each of her bounces. Her legs wrapped around his waist, desperately wanting to be as close to him as physically possible. He nuzzled his face into her hair, smelling in the exotic jungle smell. His tail's hand reached back behind him, grabbing the plug keeping the stone tub filled with water and pulling it free to let the water drain out of the stone bowl.
With the water gone he could grab Atotoztli and pull her onto his waist as he laid on his back, letting her be on top to give her more room to move. He guided her hops on his waist, letting her moans pour out like melted ice cream on a hot rock in the sun in the middle of the desert.
Yo se que no he sido un santo
Es que no estoy echo de carton
"Ah, oh, Ahui! Mi amor, sí! Deeper! Deeper!"
Ahuizotl grabbed her wrists and pulled himself back up. He leaned his back up against the wall of the tub and pressed Atotoztli closer to him. When he had her in his arms, he sat on the edge of the tub and bounced her in his lap, sending his cock deeper into her warm pussy.
"Ahugh! Ah- Ah- Ahui! Oh great suns yes!"
No solo de pan vive el hombre
Y no de excusas vivo yo
He could feel her walls constricting around him, her legs twitching and squirming around him as her climax son approached. He slammed her down onto his member again and she moaned loudly, screaming out his name into the bathroom. The wet slapping of flesh on flesh and their moans echoed through the room.
Ahuizotl let out a deep throated growl as he thrust into Atotoztli faster and harder. The heavy breathing and growls were the only sounds he let out as he listened to Atotoztli's melody of moans reaching his ears. "Ah-Ahui! I-I'm almost there!" She thrust her head forward, bouncing on his hips once again and connected their mouths with a deep kiss.
Solo de errores se aprende
Y hoy se que es tuyo mi corazón
Their tongues danced together in their shared warm saliva, the taste of each other's mouth numbing their senses. The tongue battle continued until Ahuizotl broke from the kiss and grabbed his mate's waist, thrusting with all his might as he felt her insides milking him for all he was worth. Her tight vaginal muscles grasping for his member to stay buried deep inside her. The twitching of his veins telling him he was close to done.
"Nnnngh! Oh Ahui-Ahuizo-tl! Yes! Oh, sí! TE AMO! AHUIZOTL!"
Atotoztli screamed as she hit her climax, her walls gripped Ahuizotl's cock tightly and held him as tight as they could. Her liquid-love juices pumped out of her like spray from a waterfall. Her eyes rolled back into her head and all she could see was white for that brief moment of pure ecstasy. She felt her lover cum right after her. He roared as he pumped her womb full of his seed. The white jizz went straight to her womb and filled her insides with a deep burning fire. Her stomach bloated slightly, another load pumped in after the last and leaking from the little space that was left between their connected bodies.
AAaaay... AAaaay... AAaaay... Ay Ay
Ay todo lo que he hecho por tí
Fue una tortura perderte
Me duele tanto que sea así
The filling was too much for Atotoztli, the feeling of being so full, and she fainted on her lover's lap with his cock still inside of her. Ahuizotl held her in his arms, his own eyes drooping from the strong… session they had just had together. The cum collected in the bottom of the tub as he pulled out of her battered lips. A white puddle at his feet.
He let out a deep sigh of contempt, peace and tranquility. His chest heaved as he tried slowing his fast beating heart. He took Atotoztli in his arms, smiling at how adorable she looked while sleeping with a blush on her face and her stomach extended from his cum making her bloat.
He grabbed a towel with his tail's hand and began drying off both himself and his mate. He returned to their room, laying her down on the bed and pulling the woven covers over her breathing form and slid in with her himself. In her sleep, she snuggled up closer to him. A smile spread across his face as he wrapped his arms around her and pulled her into his chest, falling into a blissful sleep.
Sigue llorando perdón
Yo ya no voy a llorar... por tí
FIN
'When you realize you want to spend the rest of your life with a person, you want the rest of your life to start as soon as possible.'
'Billy Crystal'
The funny thing about Ahuizotl, is that that's actually an actual mythical creature from Aztec stories. An actual Aztec ruler was named Ahuitzotl (or Ahuizotl I've seen both used), the eighth Aztec ruler, the Hueyi Tlatoani of the city of Tenochtitlan. And he was the son of princess Atotoztli II. So naturally after finding this out, I chose Ahuizotl's female's counter part's name. Even though it's a little weird since that's actually the name of the actually Aztec ruler's mother. But I couldn't just let myself choose a slightly edited name like switching the last letter of his name with an 'a', it would sound too weird when they bang and their shouting out names that similar. He himself took his name from the legendary creature from Aztec legend, which Aztec's believed to be a true creature and not a representation of the king.
The babies that you will see in the next part are actually based off of this real Aztec ruler's children. He had two sons and a daughter. Both sons have the same names as the real sons of Ahuitzotl. However, I could never find his daughter's name. It was like there was no record of her except that Ahuitzotl HAD a daughter.
So anyway, the meaning of all this rambling is that I tried basing the characters off of reality and legend that exists on the real world. A lot of the creatures and monsters and things from the show are actually based off of real legends and folk-stories. Like, in fairytales a changeling was a shape shifting fairy that took the place of an infant child or one that died and lived in its place.
The writers do their resource, that's all I'm sayin'...
I don't own the song in any way! It's 'La Tortura' by Shakira. I thought a Spanish song seemed appropriate.