A/N: My first story. I was inspired by the other stories around here and just absolutely loved the movie, so, here I am. Happens a little bit after the movie. BE kind and review! Puh-leeeeaase?
-Well, it's been what, three years? Four? And I just finished watching Flushed Away again and remembered this story. Came back to a bunch of awesome reviews and felt really awesome. Apparently my 13 year old self was half-way decent =D Idk if I could finish it, don't remember where I was going exactly and I haven't written anything in a long time. But thanks everyone for all the awesome comments! =DDD
Flushed Away Fanfiction Story
Chapter One: Injured in the Line of Duty
Rita woke up slowly. It was a beautiful morning in the sewer. She could hear the store clerks yelling out their wares, the staring of various boats, and the scuffle of her siblings downstairs and sometimes the occasional "Shocky!" It was bliss.
Then she heard Roddy.
"Oops. Sooorry! Excuse me. Pardon me. Whoa!"She could hear the muffled sounds of the challenge of getting up the stairs in the Malone House. She stifled a laugh at the thought of Roddy trying to get past the numerous traps and obstacles.
Finally Roddy reached the doorway to Rita's room. He swerved to avoid Fergus as he skated to edge of the stairs as other children lining the hallway cheered. He wobbled and almost dropped the tray of two cups of tea he was holding. He carefully lifted his foot and knocked on Rita's door.
"Hello? May I come in?" He questioned the door as he nervously watched Shocky across the hall.
"Well I'm sure you can. But you may come in if that's what ya mean." She said as she sat up.
"Ha Ha. As it turns out I can't come in so if you would be so kind..."
Rita sighed. "Fine, just wait until I get dressed.
She quickly threw on her Union Jack pants and her green top, one of her few outfits. She went over to the door and reached for the handle. She hesitated for a second. It got quiet outside the door all of the sudden. Then she heard Roddy.
"Hey, Shocky, I'm sure we can work this in some other time. I'm rather busy at the moment so maybe you could-"
Rita heard a loud zap and winced. "Shocky!" She heard Shocky pitter patter away as a rather loud crash emanated from the other side along with a muttered curse . She opened the door at that moment to see Roddy bent over facing away from her apparently trying to scoop up what was the rest of what looked like a cup of tea.
"Well how thoughtful of you. I just love some spiced up tea in the morning." She grinned.
Roddy shot up, surprised at the sound of her voice. He somehow landed on his feet only to slip and fall on the floor with a loud thud! He groaned as he realized a shard had lodged itself into his hand.
"Well, that was a letdown. All that for a shard in my hand. Smashing" He said as he winced and pulled out the rather long shard.
"Oh buck up. It could be worse." Rita rolled her eyes as Roddy got up.
"I suppose your right. Ow! What in the name of-"Roddy yelped as he turned around. Rita tried to smother a chuckle as she realized her prediction was right. "What?" Roddy looked at himself and then noticed the other shard sticking out of his bottom. "Oh I feel so special now. The great predictions of Rita Malone have graced themselves upon me!" He dramatically exclaimed as he threw up his hands into the air, thus inducing an intake of breath and a wince of pain.
"Well now. How 'bout we go down and get some more tea eh?"
A/N: Don't forget to review. I'd love to know what your thinking about my story so far and ways to improve! (o.O)
