After a number of you complained about the lack of speech marks through out the piece ( I assure you I did you use them and if anybody wants Ill send you the original copies to prove it ) poor spelling, grammar and the syntax. I decided to delete the previous draft and resubmit the piece in the hope that the speech mark will appear and the number of other problems reduced.
Thank you for commenting on the previous draft (they all got deleted) and hope you read and comment on this draft instead.