Hi this is my first time Writting a fan fiction, although I have read many before, this is based on ultimate spiderman season four, where Harry Osborn was stuck inside of anti-venom, and put in a deep coma where he may not come out of it alive! I may have added my own character "Elizabeth Osborn" she is a couple of years younger than Harry , If you can please review, all feedback is good because it helps me improve my Writting, Sorry if it's bad...
This is all my fault, I'm the one who let Harry come on the mission. The words kept playing over and over in Peter's mind "I'm so sorry Harry, I'm gonna find a way to fix this' Peter said out aloud. He felt broken, with his best friends in a coma 'I hope Flash and Harry are OK' he thought. "Peter dinners ready" Aunt May yelled from down stairs, Peter made his way down stairs and sat at the dinner table, "Peter dear, are you alright?".. "Yeah aunt may... I guess so, I just feel uneasy because of what happened to Harry and Flash" peter explained. "Oh don't beat yourself up dear, it was Harry's choice to go on the mission not yours, don't beat yourself up Peter." That night after dinner, Peter started to think about Elizabeth Osborn and how it might effect her. After all, she was only fourteen.
That night at the Osborn penthouse
"Elizabeth are you okay?" Norman asked his daughter. "Yeah dad just fine... I don't really feel like eating tonight I think I might head up to my room and lye down" Liz replied. She got up from the long table and exited the room, she started to think about her brother and how he might not wake from that life taking sleep. 'Harry please be okay, please come back. I really miss you, please awaken from that coma, I just miss you annoying me, I miss having an older brother' Elizabeth felt tears burst out of her eyes, she wanted to make sure that octopus suffered for what he had done to her brother. She wanted to make sure he would pay for making her father turn into a monster. "Otto Octavius you are going to pay for making my life miserable" she screamed. She finally lyed down and she fell asleep.
a couple of hours later.. Still at the Osborn penthouse
Elizabeth woke from her sleep and got dressed into jeans and a shirt and wandered down stairs, she heard voices so she rushed up stairs to get her baseball bat, she walked slowly down the stairs trying not to make any noise. She heard familiar voices coming from the kitchen. Elizabeth had the bat in a firm position in her hands, she turned the corner to find her father in his iron patriot suit with spiderman standing direct opposite him, they were fighting. " You will pay for what you did to my son spiderman" the iron patriot yelled. Elizabeth stood in the doorway looking angry and confused at the same time, Spiderman was about to say say something back when he saw her, " well what spiderman" Norman said, " maybe we shouldn't fight in front of her" spiderman said pointing at Elizabeth. "It's rude to point you know!" Elizabeth said shooting a smirke at Peter.
"Lizzy go upstairs now!" Her father demanded " I...I just wanted a drink and I heard voices so I grabbed my baseball bat" She replied
"Maybe I should just go" spiderman said.. "Maybe you should go" Norman replied with a sharp voice. spiderman left through the window. Norman turned to his unsettled daughter " back to bed please Liz" her father said. Elizabeth left.
the next day at the SHIELD triskellion
Peter stared into the healing tube where his best bud lyed uncontious, 'I'll get you out of there Harry... I promise' Peter whispered to the glass tube before leaving the room.
A little while later
Norman stood near the tube with Elizabeth beside him. Norman walked away to talk to Dr. Connors about Harry's condition. Elizabeth walked over to the tube where her brother lyed, she looked at the ground and out of the corner of her eyes she saw something move, she looked up where she saw her brother open his eyes. "OH MY GOD, HARRY YOUR...YOUR ALIVE!" She screamed, Liz fainted, Norman rushed over to pick his daughter off of the ground where he saw that his son was awake "Harry.. You are alive" Norman couldn't believe his own eyes. His son was alive..