Disclaimer: First, I don't own Naruto and this is my First fanfic. My inspiration come's from reading a lot of fanfic's from other people, so if you see something that you read in another story, then I say I don't own any of that and it is just a too long list of all the authors. So that's why there is this explanation. I hope you enjoy this fanfic.
(this text is unnofcial beta reader sjorsie)
(this is Dude45)
Chapter 1: The ambush. (well, that's a spoiler…)
It was a quiet sunny morning when one 3 year old Naruto woke up. He was all cheery and happy during the breakfast. He was waiting for the ANBU Neko.
"Were is she?" Naruto asked one of the ANBU who said to bring him to her.
"Don't worry. She has a surprise planned in the forest for you." The ANBU and Naruto walked towards the forest were they came in a clearing. Naruto said "ANBU-san, were is Neko-chan?"
The ANBU said "she is coming Naruto, she and the rest of the ANBU have a surprise for you." Then Naruto saw a cat masked ANBU in the middle of the clearing. Naruto yelled "Neko-chan, Neko-chan" and he rushed forward to meet her.
Meanwhile the Third Hokage saw one of the ANBU standing in his office. "What is the problem Neko-san?" The cat ANBU said "Sir, I can't find Naruto anywhere. I spoke to the owner of the orphany(I don't know if I spelled that right). And she said that I had picked him up earlier."
"Where are the other ANBU!" the Third screamed. "We need to find him now!"
The Third and some of the loyal ANBU followed him as the dog masked Anbu summoned his dogs to find Naruto's scent.
In the clearing Naruto found out that the cat masked ANBU not Neko-chan was. "Where is Neko-chan? What do you want?" Meanwhile 2 other ANBU came and they cornered him and one of them drew a sword and walked towards the boy.
The rest drew kunai's and watched. "It's time to die, demon." Said the cat masked ANBU. Naruto ran past one of the ANBU and ran to the forest. Naruto screamed when one of the kunai's hit his shoulder. The other kunai's were thrown in the back of his knee's and in the other shoulder. Naruto screamed for 3 minutes before one of the ANBU walked towards him with his sword drawn.
Meanwhile 2 unknown sources heard Naruto scream. One was the Hokage and his ANBU. And the other was a samurai who was practicing about 100 meters away.
When Naruto stopped screaming he saw the ANBU above him ready with his sword.
The Anbu brought down his sword towards Naruto's head but another sword stopped it.
The anbu was surprised and looked up, only to see a sword coming at him at high speed.
The next moment, he was lying down, his mask shattered just like his face.
The others grabbed for their weapons but a hail of kunai's came from the side and killed them.
When the Hokage arrived there was no trace of the samurai or Naruto…
And that is the first chapter of my first fanfic. Please review and tell me if you like it. And advice is always welcome.
Sjorsie, the unofficial beta reader!
Okay…this is the best story I have ever seen from you! Then again, it is your worst story also…
Dude45
This is my first story! Your first story wan't that good either!
Sjorsie
Oh hush, everyone loves a mix of Shikamaru, Naruto, Konohamaru, Moegi, Udon and the sexy jutsu…and yes, I am advertising! READ MY STORY ^^
And another thing…
*The others grabbed for their weapons but a hail of kunai's came from the side and killed them.*
Since when do ANBU die from kunais??? I mean, aren't they supposed to be the best? Its just wrong…
Dude45
Oh screw you…
Sjorsie
Well, ill look forward to review *coughflamecough* your next chapter ^^ BYE!
Review please!
By the way, did you notice that this talking messing around piece is as long as this chapter ^^