I'm new at this so no fire, but please review.
Chapter 1: there's a monster in my living room?
I was just asleep when i heard screaming and glass shatter i jumped out of bed trying not to wake up my friends who were here for a sleepover. I grabbed the neerest thing i could find (which is my skateboard) and ran down the stairs.
Okay, the skateboard wouldn't work. Whatever that thing is it's huge and very intimidating. It had one horn, but the other was missing with only a broken stump like someone had broken it off. I looked at my mother's still body on the ground before the courage to fight flowed into me, but i was beat to the monster by a boy with sea-green eyes and black hair. He stabbed it from behind when it turned to attack me. " I thought i killed that thing years ago." He muttered out of breath.
My friends, obviously awake, ran down the stairs." What happened?" The red head Elise asked. " You guys missed it, they just defeated some monster" i said awestruck, then my eyes trailed off and landed on my mother's limp body. " But my mom didn't make it" i said, my eyes stinging. " You... you killed it all on your own?" Angelina my 'best friend' asked obviously ignoring what I just said. " Yeah, in fact we kill monsters for a living" Green-eyes said. The grey-eyed blonde behind him hit the back of his head and said " They might not all be like us. Dang seaweed brain." A boy in crutches walked in and asked " Guys, why did you just ditch me?" He practically screamed it. " Shhhh! My baby sister is sleeping I said. Then my eyes widened in realization. my baby sister was all alone.
I ran all the way up stairs into my little sisters room and to the side of her crib. She slowly opened her eyes and said the only word she new " Mommy" it nearly broke my heart i picked her up and started walking down stairs " Shhh, mommy's not here right now okay?" I said. As i got to the bottom and turned her head so she wouldn't see our mother, on the floor dead. She soon fell back asleep.
So please review should i continue or not.