Authors description! Read won't you?
Yeah so this is the first time I ever write anything so i'm not sure if it will be any good or not so it would be great if you could tell me what you think and what I need to change and improve? C:
Also English is not my first language and I don't have a spell checker so i'm sorry if there are a lot of miss spelled words in this story D:
His breath seems heavy as his chest moves up and down. Inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale. "He must have a cold" the dark figure mumbles unable to stop himself. Trying to avoid making even the tiniest bit of noise and getting in was a challenge on its own, so risking it now was nothing short of idiotic. But for some reasons he seemed to be lucky for once and the smaller figure seemed to be sleeping much deeper then usual. Plus the bird wasn't there, thank god the bird wasn't there.
Before when he entered the room he realized that he knew it far to well, the smell crackin in the door, the texture on the wall, the heavy smell of liquorices. Even though it was as dark as night in there he could just tell where everything was. But then again it was almost always dark as night in there. Or in the winter anyway.
Standing over the smaller figure I couldn't help but feel a strange wave of nostalgia come flushing over him. This was his house and yet he had not been in this room or this exact spot in years, decades even. He smirked and prepared him self to what was going to happen next. If he was going to do this he had to do it right, Messing up was not an option!
He bowed down and slid his hand under the younger males back and as he did so he could feel the ribs standing out from the side and the spine sting him gently but he thought nothing of it. He had to be careful now! So he slid his other hand under the back of the younger males legs and behind the knees. He was still just adolescent but he was way to skinny for it to be normal and this worried the larger male a bit, but he had no time to think about it now and so brushed the thought off before he came caught up in it.
This was it. This was the moment he could be no means mess up!. And so he slowly picked him up. The every thing had worked out it seemed, Things were going just as planed! And glancing at the clock he decided that he was even going to be on time for once as well! But sometimes even the best plans go wrong as the poor man got to know when the smaller figure sneezed so violently that his whole body jumped, startling the older man so much that he not only dropped the adolescent boy on the bed but the sneeze also gave him a good enough of a shock for his legs to give in as well, making him drop on the bed over the boy.
Thinking fast he trusted his arms forward and with luck managed to keep there heads from colliding with eachother and even with his eye's closed he could feel that there heads and not to mention there faces were just centimeters away. He kept his eyes closed a few seconds longer and hoped that this mistake would go away, and that he was still just holding the other male and getting ready to go. But it would not go away and seeing that he had no choice he opened his eyes.
What was staring back at him was exactly what he had been expecting, Bright big and purple eye's were looking at him with a mix of an afraid and a shocked look but almost as soon as he opened his that look transformed in to recognition and anger.
If there was ever a right time for poor Denmark to be afraid, then it was now.