Hi al this is mine fanfic I wud luv it if u al comented on de storie
Artemys wus strtn to wunder wot his purpuse in lif wus. He had robd evry bnk in de contry, cond evry conmn in de wrld nd stil he wasn't sur if dis wus wat he rely wantd to do wif his lif. It wus mosty cuz of de wy his ma takd to heem; sayn, 'arty, me nd daddy mis u wen r u comn hom frm dat terble terble skol?' nd of corse, Butler wus tryn to gt heem on de strate nd narow as wel. But de fn off tryn to steel ppls stuf wus extremely inticn. So hee decidd dat dis wus goin to b his lst jub evr den heed b a nrml skolboy.
Hee decidd dat de lst evr jub wus goin to b a thft, nt hees bst thft, mind bt it recwired lots of dedicton. He wus goin to steel de epic donut off donut wrld.
U may tink dis aint a gud robry bt donut wrld wus the mst hitech donut shop eva bult. It had bulet-prof wndows and sentrys at de dor wif epic bulet-shater-water-machin-guun complt wif bulet-bounc teknlgy, eet wus practcly a fortres for donuts.
Artemys wus dep in hees concntatin stte wen hee relised it wus almst imposble to gt into bt hees brian wudnt giv up so esly. Hee thot of de wys hee cud gt in :thru de chimny?no, 2 dangrus hee cud gt rosted by the fires afta al; brek de windws? Theyre bulet-prof. his eys sudnly litup, hee had gt it!
Artymis nd Butler walkd up to de donut fortres nd de sentrys stod wif ther guns traned on Butler. Butler kept walkn. Wen hee wus rite in frnt off dem he stoped,punchd 1 and swept de legs frum unda de otha 1. Thy wer in! hees pln had workd!al thy had to doo now wus colect de donut. Artymis strode in nd placd his hnd on de epic donut, finly it wus his! He reeched for eet and puld it bt as soon as hee puld de alrm went off!
Wnt to find wat hapens next? Plz coment on dis I rely ned suport.