Hey guys!
So I have been having this story idea run around in my head for a really long time, so I figured I might as well post it and see if people actually like the idea of the story! I am new to posting stories so I may be a little rusty at first but I hope to get better over time with practice and from yall's feedback from my story! I am just going to give a brief summary and y'all tell me what you think:
Valentine Todd is a gifted teenager. Attending school for the musically gifted, Valentine excels beyond her peers, and after she is asked to perform a showcase her senior year she couldn't be more thrilled. As her show draws closer, relationships are tested, walls are torn down and somebody gets hurt in end. As her friends, boyfriend, and family all begin to suddenly turn on her, Valentine has to realize that for somethings, she might not be able to trust anyone to come and save her. Will Valentine be able to perform her dream show, or will a villain from her past come back to haunt her?
Basically this story is just a girl version of Vlad, who goes to a music school, and has to deal with problems and villains she had never dreamed of having to face. Valentine will still be a vampire and a majority of the characters from the series will be featured in this story.
So please read, review, and give me any kind of feedback that y'all can! But not too negative okay?
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Chapter One
I don't understand why I am still here. Haven't they been looking for me? Don't they know that I won't be able to survive this torture, this…this MADNESS? All I ever feel anymore is pain. Pain from all of the cruel, insensible, inhumane torture that D'Ablo and his goons have been inflicting on me for what seems like an eternity. The pain from the heart wrenching, knock the wind right out of you feeling, of your family, your boyfriend, and your friends, all leaving you alone to die in this place. These thoughts have been going around and around in my head, every day and every night, but every time I have to endure more of this pain, all I can do is cling onto the little sliver of hope that I have left in me, that Henry and Otis will come for me, to finally save me from this hell.
The thought of hope slipped from my mind as I heard the door open, the squeaking of the hinges ringing in my ear, only to see D'ablo standing there, with his favorite knife, smiling evilly down at me. As his footsteps come closer, the tears streaming down my cheeks, only one thought came to my mind:
How did one of the biggest nights in my entire life, lead to this kind of hell?
Short chapter I know but I just wanted to try and get the ball rolling.
Read and Review!
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