Here we go my first fanfic (well story/narrative anyways). It is a kingdom hearts AU/ with plenty of OOC to go around.
Pairings are as follows Sora x Namine, a little Roxas x Kairi.
If you have any questions. Review, and I shall tell.
Disclaimer: I Don't Own Kingdom Hearts, I however do own this story.
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The halls are empty.
Light...nonexistent. No lights or windows appeared to exist here.
A boy sits in a room blinded by darkness. He waits for something, a sign... anything.
He cant see anything in all this darkness.
A small light appears, apparently floating in the air…it seemed so distant, even if it was no more that five feet from himself. The light merely hovered in the air as if in waiting. The boy decides to follow the light, this was his sign.
He began to follow the light through the unknown building that encased him. The light radiated just enough so the boy could see in front of him, but not much.
There was no noise, he couldn't hear a thing. No noise was being emanated by himself, the light, or anything else that might be in this place. He hadn't tried talking, but he couldn't even hear his footsteps so he figured it hopeless.
He walks around cautiously, so as to not be caught off guard. He notices something. Every once in a while the light would hover close enough to a wall he could see something on it. There was some sort of substance staining the walls, ceiling and floor. He shrugged of this new found intelligence and continued on.
He couldn't help but think he was walking through the longest hallway in the world when suddenly the light came to stop. It stopped next to a doorway, on the left side of the hallway. The boy walked towards the door opening. The light just hovered motionless. He knew he had to go into the room. The boy stood in the doorway when darkness once again took over him. He turned around only to notice the light vanished(1).
The boy took a few blind steps into the room before he stopped. There were objects he could see at the far end of the room. They appeared to be eyes, three sets to be exact. If they belonged to people he could clearly tell the height differences between them. The right appeared to be the tallest with the left being close second, and the center being the shortest of the trio.
He took two more steps forward and stopped. The eyes...they moved. He waited, staring at the seemingly floating sets of eyeballs. Before long the gap between them shortened once again. He continued to just stand, waiting for the eyes to make another move.
Suddenly there was a flash of extremely bright light. It made the boy cringe, as he quickly brought his arms to his face in a feeble attempt to block the light from his eyes. Light appeared from nowhere as every single bit of the room was covered in its powerful glow. His eyes slowly adjusted to the new lighting in the room when he realized he was alone. The eyes he had seen before, they were weird, unlike anything he had ever seen before. Red and black, red and blue, black and orange. These were the color combinations found going from left to right. The shape and color of the eyes seemed almost unreal to him. But no matter how unreal or new to him, they had an air of familiarity.
Where did they go? He quickly threw the thought aside and walked further into the room. Inspecting the room as he walked he noticed it to be pure white, there was no indication of where the walls met with the floor or ceiling. The light which was illuminating the room so nicely had no source. The only objects in the room aside from himself was a white table and a single chair. It was a small tea table, no more than 2 feet in diameter. They matched the color of their surroundings very well but still stood out. He turned around and looked toward the hallway. Despite all the light emanating within the room none escaped into the hallway(2). Anything and everything beyond the door remained shrouded in darkness.
The boy contemplated his situation when he saw footprints leading into the room. They looked like the same substance that covered the hallway. He followed the footprints with his gaze, they ended at him. Not only was it covering his shoes but (for the most part) the entirety of his body. His legs, torso and arms. He was completely drenched in the odd substance. The boy wondered how he could be so completely covered in something and not feel it. It was smeared in his face and matted into his hair.
His thoughts remained on what exactly was covering him. Finally his mind came to a conclusion as to what the substance was.
Another thought ran through his mind interrupting him. Where was he? And, how did he get here? He remembered waking up with a slight pain in the dark room... He became slightly perturbed at the fact that this was all he could remember. Whatever...back to the substance.
It was blood, he couldn't believe how he didn't notice till now. The scent over powered his nose, he couldn't believe how such a pungent odor would of escaped him for so long.
He inspected his body and found multiple wounds, he figured some of it belonged to him. But that didn't explain all the blood in the hallway, and why it so drastically covered himself. He wasn't hurt that bad. This meant the blood, or at least the majority of it had to belong to someone, or…something else.
He dropped the topic, to tired to think any further. He walked down to the table and sat in the only available chair. He laid his head in his arms, hopefully sleep would produce answers.
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I never thought about this on my first writing. I have no idea what the light is. So, since its my story I figure I have a right to make something up. Just pretend the light was never really there. See it as a metaphor for his Heart/Instincts guiding him to where he should be.
Seriously...me and random light sources...wtf. Oh well. As for this, same as above. Don't think of what he sees as being real (as far as the lighting of the rooms go). His Heart/Instinct is trying to edge him toward the path he must take. So of course looking back would be dark, if he was attracted by a light from there he would have been going backwards. As for why the room was pitch black before (except for the eyes of course), think of it as his Heart/Instinct feeling not quite sure enough to go further (blame it on the random eyes, that would make anybody unsure whether or not they wanted to continue forward.)
Ok. If this seems familiar it should. This is my Re-Posting of this fanficiction. It appeared to get quite a few hits but thats about it. (well it had 800 when I deleted it, I thought it was a lot). I only ever received two reviews over the time I had it up. I finally ask someone to read and review it for me...oh boy did I get an earful. As it turns out, I have horrible grammar and need to learn to make my stories more appealing to the reader. Quite a lot of my writing was just walls of text, which can be intimidating and make people not want to read. Not only that but somehow the second chapter I posted was actually chapter three. Guess what chapter three was...no really I will give you three seconds to guess.
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So disappointed, you thought I accidentally put chapter two in the third chapter slot didn't you. Actually I accidentally posted chapter three up twice, once for chapter two and another for chapter three.
So this is me reinstating my story. Broken Memories, it is a story I wrote for you. Yes you as in the person reading this right now. I wrote this for YOU. So please, take my sorrowful heart into account and review. If it was not for the random person I asked to read this then I would of never found the multiple problems with my story (which btw I found her by reading her story, I liked it so much that I decided I wanted her opinion on mine)(advertising- "i could never hate you" thats the name, so go read it...now).
REVIEW... please. I'm doing this for you, in part. But I am also doing this for myself. I wouldn't be joking when if I said my self esteem/self worth was lower than 0%. So in part, your reviews will help me feel better about myself.
Now I'm not saying you have to like it, just at least leave me a review so I know you actually read it.
Ok. That was way too long. I'm sorry for the extremely long note.
I don't want to be harsh, and since its the first chapter I don't want to discourage people. But I'm not going to post chapter two until I get at least one Review.