Ummm hey my name is hinto and this is my first story plz review and tell me if I should continue or not.
chapter one: lost and found
our story begins with a transport ship is on its way to earth carrying civilians, then out of nowhere a covent attack cruiser opens fire on the ship. The cruiser sends boarding parties to kill the humans ,the marines onboard the ship try to fight them off but they were no match for the large groups of elites , grunts ,and jackals .meanwhile on the other side of the ship a women is trying to think what to do because she gave birth the day before, she then realizes even though she cannot escape the ship alive ,she hopes her son can, she gently rasies her child making sure not to wake him and puts him in a small escape pod designed just for newborns. She kisses her son and whispers "i will always love you" she then closes the pod and lunches her baby into unknown space, she prays he will be found by people who would accept him as their own. well she was half right.
Well that's the beginning I hope you liked it, review and tell me If I should continue or not. Peace out \,,,/