Hey guys 44ks here. this is a short prologue to a full length Gregor Fanfic I'm writing. Let me know what I can do to improve my writing. I'm open to ANY criticism and feedback. :) if you have any questions leave it in the review!
Hey, Boots," he said. "Hey. You can finally say my name". Gregor allowed the ghost of a smile to wash over his face. But then it suddenly left him. Just like he had left the Underland. Even now, when he should begin moving on, his thoughts were still there. But he knew that he would never again go there. Soon his mother would have them all packed up and moving to Virginia. Gregor's heart hurt a little when he thought of that. But he would never go down there again. He remembered his promise to Luxa.
"Never. I'll never get rid of you, no matter how hard I try. I love you".
No matter how much he missed her, he never wanted to go back to the Underland. He couldn't go back. Because Gregor didn't belong anywhere. Over, Under or anywhere. In the next few months he would visit the knights tomb at The Cloisters three more times. But each time it did him no good. He would have to learn how to live.
His grandmother died three months after Gregor came back from the Underland. It was just one more death on Gregor's hands. Another reason to stop trying. To stop Breathing. But Gregor couldn't do that. Couldn't even think about it. His Family needed him to much. Shortly after his grandmother's death they moved to Virginia. It was over. He would never see any of them again. Gregor didn't feel sad though. He didn't feel anything.
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
- Dr. Suess