So this is my first fanfic it is based on something I watch please leave me comments on what I need to fix
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Character info
Nico: Part of Percy's team
Will: Part of Percy's team
Lucy: Long brunette hair with bright hazel eyes and is 5'3
Jake: Short dark brown hair with brown eye 5'8
Annabeth P.O.V
Please read author's note above before you read the story i don't want any confusion.
As I was walking through the village, I can't help but to notice a rather large crowd in the middle of it, so I went to see what all the commotion was about. Apparently Perseus Jackson, the richest man in the village was getting married to Piper Mclean. So, that means I have a chance. You all are probably wondering what I mean so let me tell you about myself.
My name is Annabeth Chase I was just an infant when my foster mother found me in the middle of the forest. My foster mom is a wonderful woman even though she lives in the woods. I remember my foster mom or Sally Jackson told me that she once had a son named Perseus Jackson and now im here to see if he is the one. (A/N: This would be like a show I watched so the characters are very different from how they usually act) Sally told me that his son had a crescent moon birthmark somewhere on the top part of his body so that makes it easy.
As I was walking a girl stepped on my foot then I accidentally stepped on her foot.
"Hey beggar boy, are you blind" she screeched, and then shoved me. You all are probably wondering what she is talking about, well i am dresses like a beggar boy with ragged clothing and my hair in a cap.
"Hey you stepped on me first" I retorted back.
"Can you even afford to compensate for making my shoes dirty. you must be blind"
I smirked "Would you rather wear my shoes then" I said while pointing to the shoes I was wearing.
"Who would wear a beggar's shoe," she said looking disgusted, "By the looks of it you can't even afford it. Why don't you kneel down and prostrate yourself? Maybe then I might forgive you" she said while smirking.
"Hey you seemed like a pretty girl, but why do you have such a shameful mouth?"
"You-,"
We didn't notice a thief taking her pouch until the thief put it right in front her face.
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*Back at the Jackson manor*
One of the queen's servant is announcing that Perseus Jackson must marry Piper Mclean.
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*Back at the village*
The thief smirked as he ran past everyone "Come and get me!"
"Catch the thief! Give my back my pouch" cried the girl
Suddenly the thief…
Alright i was going to write more but i wanted to see how people liked it first if i get at least 3 reviews i will continue to write and make the chapters longer for now i just need 3 review leave me some helpful criticisms and tips since it is my first time writing a fanfic. :)