Hey everyone! This is my first fan fiction and I am so excited! I will try to update as often as I can, but I take tons of dance classes a week, so no promises ;). I need some help with the next chapters if you want to give me any ideas. Any thoughts on this first chapter? Good and bad are accepted and all will be read! Okay, enough of this, lets get to the story already! ~Love ya

Dipper:

My twins brown hair lays still on the beds sheer white pillow. Her breathing is steady, for now. Her body is outlined with a light blue glow, the same color as the center of the portal. I haven't slept for days; to worried to sleep. Why is she here? Why not me? Mabel believed him even though I told her not to. It should be me with the IV in my arm. Not her. It should be me, laying unconscious on the hospital bed. Not innocent Mabel. It should be me who screams out little blue dust every hour, the pain in my voice echoing off the walls. Not sweet, wonderful, knows to do what her heart tells her, Mabel.

Flashback:

"I hate you Mabel!" I screamed. I don't know where all the anger rose from, but it managed to climb up my throat and escape between my lips, aiming towards the person I loved most in the world. The one person who stood by me no matter what happened. Through all the ups and downs, Mabel's been there, the only one who understood me. And what do I do in return? I scold her.

Soos was laying unconscious on the ground. All she did was try to hold my hand after we saw Stan's brother walk out of the portal. I pulled my hand away and screamed those four words. The hurt spread across her face said that was the worst thing I could have ever done. But at that point, I didn't care. I turned on my heel, and stormed my way to the elevator.

It was only when I heard a thud behind me when I turned around. I look down as Mabel lays still on the ground. Her eyes closed as if she was asleep. A blue light softly forms around her unconscious figure. I run to her, screaming her name all the way. Collecting her in my arms, I feel electricity surrounding her. As I cry into her sweater, I hear Grunkle Stan behind me, "Kid I didn't mean to hurt her. You know I didn't. I never planned-"

"You never planned what, huh? To tell us the truth? To have us as your niece and nephew? Just get away! Because of you she could be dead!" I yell. Through the tears, I can see Stan's surprised face. I want him to be laying here. I want him to know what he's done. I want him to feel the pain I feel. He probably does though. He loves Mabel almost as much as I do. Almost. No one can love her as much as I do.

I felt a strong tug on my back pack, and before I knew it, I was pulled off of my sister. I screamed her name and kicked Stan as he flung me over his shoulder. "NO! LET ME GO! YOU CAN'T KEEP ME AWAY FROM HER! MABEL! MABEL, NO!" I scream as I try to get away from him. He doesn't flinch, and he doesn't let go. It was only after his brother scooped Mabel up and ran to the elevator when he let me go.

I lay on the ground, folded into a tiny ball to keep myself from lunging at Grunkle Stan. I just keep crying. I don't when I'll stop, I don't know if I'll ever stop. But I do. And when I stop I ask Stan where he's taking her.

"To the bunker."

I hope you guys all enjoyed the first chapter! I sure did :). Again, if you have any suggestions or comments, just let me know. I will not use all of the suggestions, just some that will work into the story. I have the basic idea of whats going to happen, I just need some details. Any Q's? Just let me know. I'll answer them the best I can without giving away the story. See you in the next chapter for Mabel's P.O.V.! ~Love ya