Maria's Revenge

Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight. If I did I would be rich, famous, and dating Taylor Lautner! : P!

Ch. 1

The Long Vision

Jasper's POV

Alice and I had just come back from hunting. We were all alone at the house. We were on the sofa and I was reading a Civil War book and Alice was on my lap.

I looked up at the clock. It was 11 a.m.; everyone would be back from school at 3. And Carlisle and Esme who went shopping for the day would be back an hour after that. So we had the whole house to ourselves.

Alice was randomly the scars on my arm. She looked so cute when she did that. I let myself be absorbed in her bubbly and optimistic emotions. I smiled in joy.

Suddenly, Alice froze in my arms and got a blank stare in her eyes and then they closed. I recognized what was going on immediately. She was having a vision.

I put down my book and waited a couple of seconds and when she didn't snap out of it I said, "Alice? Alice?" 'That's weird', I thought, 'She normally wakes up when I call her'.

"Alice" I asked again and got no response. "Alice?! Babe, wake up!" It had been 15 minutes and now I was really starting to freak out.

I started shaking her, and nothing…….again. I got up and started dialing Carlisle's number.

"Hello?" I heard Carlisle's voice say.

"Carlisle, something's wrong with Alice!" I shouted, panicking to no end.

"Jasper? What do you mean?" Carlisle asked. I could tell he was alarmed.

"Alice went into a vision and won't wake up!"

"Ok, I'll call the school to excuse the others out. Esme and I will be there in five." And he hung up.

I went over to Alice and started to shake her for the umpteenth time. "Come on Alice, snap out of it!" I pleaded.

Five minutes later, on cue, the door opened to reveal a very worried Carlisle and Esme followed by Edward, Bella, Nessie, Emmett, and Rosalie.

"How long has she been like that?" Carlisle asked as soon as he was threw the door.

"About 35 minutes" I said.

Carlisle's eyes widened.

"Edward", Carlisle said slowly, "What is she thinking?"

"Carlisle, I – I can't get a read on her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Edward yelled.

'Oh My Carlisle'

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU CAN'T GET A READ ON HER???!!!!" I shouted.

"Here let gently try to wake her up" Emmett said.

He walked over to where Alice was on the sofa and started poking her. "Alice? Wake up now."

"Emmett what are you doing?" Rosalie said annoyed.

"Uh, Waking up Alice. Gosh, Rosalie get with the program. Where were you five seconds ago?" Emmett said.

"Well, it's obviously NOT WORKING!!!!!" Rosalie shouted.

"Fine, let me try this then." Then he picked Alice up so that she was in midair and started spinning her around yelling "ALICE!!!!! WAKE UP!!!"

"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING?" I yelled.

"PUT HER DOWN RIGHT NOW!" Esme screamed at the top of her lungs, which by the way is really loud.

"Ok" Emmet said casually as he DROPPED my WIFE to the floor. I caught her and then gently put her on the sofa before turning back to Emmett the idiot and giving him my most evil glare.

"THAT IS IT!!!!!!!!" I screamed as I tackled him to the floor.

"DO I GRAB YOUR WIFE, START SPINNING HER AROUND LIKE A MANIAC AND THEN DROP HER TO THE GROUND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Hello, I'm right here!" Rosalie said in annoyance.

Then I heard a gasp. I was about to turn around and yell at that person until I realized that it was Alice.

She was panting and shaking like crazy.

Bella ran to Alice, touched her arm and frantically asked "What did you see?"

Suddenly, Alice's eyes snapped open and she screamed.

I'm sorry I have to be cruel to you and give you a cliffy but it's really good so ….I couldn't resist. I'm sorry I am weak!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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P.s. Sorry for any grammar /spelling mistakes. My co writer can't type.