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The Fall of Redwall

Prologue

If you walk through Mossflower, you'll come upon the small town of Redwall. The families live in huts near the path and seldom see visitors. They live close together and are very friendly. Once every season they all get together and have a feast. The town has an Abbot or Abbess that watches over the other woodlanders in Redwall. Past the town of Redwall, if you walk for half a day on the path, is the ruins of Redwall Abbey


Young Trillia walks by the ruins of Redwall Abbey one spring afternoon. She passes where the main gates were when she looks inside to see an old squirrel sitting in the main building, and is curious. She walks across the overgrown lawn and into the building. She has never seen him before, but feels like she has known him her entire life. She feels that he means no harm and is a friend. She sits near him in a large circle of lit candles. The aging squirrel looks up at her and smiles.

"Hello, Trillia, I am Serkin the Warrior." Trillia smilles and isn't surprised that this stranger knows her name. He waves her over and she sits closer to him.

"Would you like to hear a story?" Trillia nods. Serkin points to the face of Martin the Warrior.

"Look into Martin's eye, young one, as I tell you a tale of love, war and sadness."