Ok, this is my first fan fic so PLEASE help me. As in, writing nice, lovely, helpful, wonderful comments.
"Sit boy!!!"
Inuyasha falls to the ground, "Ungh...I wish you wouldn't do that, wench"
"And I wish that you wouldn't spy on me while I'm bathing and then call me a wench."
"But...I wasn't spying...I was watching out for....Miroku!" He said, as the lecherous monk walked up.
"Did I hear my name?" Miroku asked with curiosity
"It's obvious that Miroku is innocent." Sometimes Kagome didn't know why Inuyasha acted as he did, I mean he hated her right? Or at least found her slightly irritating. But spying on her stark naked didn't show it. She sighed, that hanyou could be so confusing sometimes.
"Yea, you heard your name...stop spying on Kagome!!" Inuyasha said with a look of 'help me out' on his face
"But I don't know what you're talking about, I was just helping Sango with some...personal matters" Miroku said innocently.
It was a well known fact that the monk and the demon slayer were just a bit more than "close friends".
"Inuyasha, I just might think that you're starting to like me," Kagome grinned coyly, "but now you have to leave because I'm still naked!!!"
"I-I-I…Do not…" He blushed, so did Kagome…all over.
"If I may interject, I think you look lovely with that full body blush" 'observed' Miroku.
Just then , Sango walked up.
"Ok, that's it, the two of you go back to the hut!"
The two men stood there
"NOW!!!"
Inuyasha and Miroku hurry off smiling
"Ugh, men"
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So…what did you think? I know it's short, but please review. I mean, honestly, this is my first fan fic. So um…yea…Just tell me. Anything at all. Ideas, tips…something. Wow, I sound desperate. REVIEW!!! Please.
Trust me. It'll get longer.