Okay, so I am starting a new story. I am still doing my other one. But I am typing them all out now. Then I'm going to be posting them one by one. I hope you enjoy this story.


Summary: Gang has gotten in trouble for their behaviors. This is like the popular 1980s movie The Breakfast Club.
Characters:
Claire/Rose- The prom queen princess the popular girl of the school.
Alyson/Lissa- Shy girl, never speaks.
Brian/Eddie- The smart, nerdy guy.
Andy/Christian- School Athlete.
Bender/Dimitri- class act, bad guy.
Richard/Stan Alto- Vice Principal Vernon.
OOC/AH. Enjoy.

Usual Disclaimer: i do not own the Idea of the Breakfast Club and I do not own VA

Saturday February 19 2011 St. Vladimir's High School, Missoula, Montana 59801. Dear Mr. Alto, we accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was that we did wrong. What we did WAS wrong. But we think you're crazy to make us write this essay telling you who we think we are, what do you care? You see us as you want to see us...in the simplest terms and the most convenient definitions. You see us as a brain, an athlete, a basket case, a princess and a criminal. Correct? That's the way we saw each other at seven o'clock this morning. We were brainwashed.
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First we meet Rose. With long dark hair, beautiful eyes, and a killer curvy body. Rose sitting in her dad's BMW as she looks out the window at the high school she attends she looks next to her at her dad. He has a big smile on his face. She rolls her eyes.

Scoffing as she speaks, "I cannot believe you can't get me out of this" she starts "I mean it's so absurd, I have to be here on a Saturday!" Crossing her arms over her chest "It's not like I'm a defective or anything"

Her dad hands her a bag for her lunch "I'll make it up to you. Honey, ditching class to go shopping doesn't make you a defective. Have a good day."

Rose rolling her eyes she holds the bag flipping her hair over her shoulder, walking towards the school.

Next we meet Eddie. Sandy hair a baby like face, fairly hansom, he is dressed in a down parka and a hat. As him his mother and his little sister sit in the car. He looks nervously at his mother. She has an angry scowl on her face.

"Is this the first time or the last time we do this?" She scolded him right before he leaves.

"L-last" he said upset stuttering.

"Well get in there and use the time to your advantage" She said hurrying him out.

"Mom we're not suppose to study" he said "We're suppose to sit there and do nothing"

"Well Mister you find a way to study."

His little sister annoyingly adds in "Yeah"

"Well go" his mom says lastly.
Finally Eddie gets out of the car and goes towards the school.

Next we get to meet Christian. A class jock; with a reputation to win at everything. He sits in his dad's truck with a sad looking expression on his face.

"Hey, I screwed around...guys screw around, there's nothing wrong with that" His father started giving him the: its okay just don't do it again, talk. Christian looks at his father "Except you got caught, Sport."
Christian nodded and looked at him "Yeah I know, mom all ready reamed me"

"You want to miss a match? You want to blow your ride?" he starts getting angrier at Christian "Now no school's going to give a scholarship to a discipline case."
Christian get's upset with his father's ranting and leaves the car quickly. Going up the stairs into the school.

We see Dimitri walking towards the school. He is wearing his famous duster and sun glasses his usual bad boy attitude worn upon his face. His hair hanging down onto his shoulders. He continues to walk as a car pulls up. The car jerks to a stop. Lissa get's out of the car. She walks to the passenger window to tell her father goodbye but he pulls away quickly. Leaving her in the parking lot. Making her way to the school.

The library quiet and calm as the children gather in it. Rose sitting at the first table of the library, Eddie walks in and sits at the table behind Rose. Christian is next, walking in and points to the seat asking permission to sit next to Rose. Seeing that he was the only person she knew and was friends with. He sat next to her. Dimitri walks in with his long strides he gets to the second table and sees Eddie sitting in which looks like his seat. Eddie looks up and scared of the look Dimitri is giving him. He gets up and leaves the table. Going to the first table of the second row, Eddie picks a seat and stays there. Lissa walks in and hurries to the last table in the back row. Dimitri puts his feet up and relaxes.

Stan Alto the vice principal walks in. He looks around at what he sees as rotten kids who have no respect towards him.
"Well, well. Here we are" He started. "I want to congratulate you on being early"

Rose raises her hand "Excuse me sir? I think there's been a mistake. I know its detention, but um… I don't think I belong here"

Stan ignoring her he continues on giving a lecture "It is now seven oh six" Eddie looks at his watch. "You have exactly eight hours and fifty-four minutes to think of why you are here. To ponder the errors of your ways" Dimitri lounges back tilting his head back spitting into the air and catching it into his mouth. Rose watches what he does and is disgusted. She looks like she is about to gag. "…And you may not talk. You will not move your seats" he looks directly at Dimitri now. "And you," he walks over to Dimitri and grabs the chair from under Dimitri's long legs. "Will not sleep" He walks around handing out paper and pencils. "All right people we're going to try something a little different today. We are going to write an essay-of no less then a thousand words. Describing to me who you think you are"

Dimitri looks at Stan and says, "Is this a test?"

Stan giving him no acknowledgement continues to walk around handing out the paper. "And when I say essay, I mean essay. I don't mean a single word repeated a thousand times. Is that clear Mr. Belikov?"

Dimitri nods, "Crystal"

Stan is now at the front of the library now. "Good. Maybe you'll learn something about yourself. Maybe you'll even-decide whether or not you'll care to return"

Eddie stands up and raises his hand "you know I can answer that right now. That'll be a No for me sir. No, because… "

Stan looks at him annoyed "Sit down Castile"

Eddie sits down as he is told. "Thank you sir"

Stan points out the door "My office is right across the hall, any monkey business is ill-advised." He looks around at all of them. "Any questions?"

Dimitri raises his hand "Yeah I got a question" Stan looks at him suspiciously wondering what his question is "Does Barry Manilow know you raid his wardrobe?"

"I'll give you the answer to that question, Mr. Belikov, next Saturday. Don't mess with the bull young man, you'll get the horns." At that he left the room. Letting the kids wait patiently as he leaves.

Dimitri looks at everyone "That man is a brownie hound"


Okay I am going to leave you guys there. I really do not know where the scene ends. I am just going by what I see in the movie as I am watching it right now. I will have the second chapter up by today