Pink eye

By ME

Hello peeps! Hope you enjoy reading this. With out further ado: the story.

Well, maybe a line, but no more talking.


Track 1

8:13pm

Shuichi Shindou was currently the fastest moving thing in Japan. All that could be seen of him was a pink blur. Shuichi knew that people were starring at him, or at least trying to, but he needed to see a doctor; now. Ever since he woke up that morning, the world was slowly getting blurrier and blurrier.

Something is very wrong with me, Shuichi thought as he glanced at the fuzz he was heading towards at the speed of light. Maybe I have a disease, one that starts in your eyes and slowly works its way to the rest of your body. Maybe I'm going to die. Why? Why me? I'm too young to die. Why? Why!

Shuichi was running so fast that the automatic door did not have time to open for him and he crashed into the glass with a resounding SMACK!

11:15pm

Shuichi dazedly woke up in a bed with cheep linen sheets and a light being shone into his eyes. He immediately, out of experience recognized it as the hospital.

"What happened? Am I going to die? Oh God, I'm going to die!"

"No, Mr. Shindou. You just received a slight concussion from err… apparently running into the door."

"But the world is still fuzzy. I am going to die, aren't I?"

"No, Mr. Shindou. Everything is going to be fine. You did not suffer any long term damages to your head and…"

Shuichi starts to sob, "I knew it… its fatal!"

"Mr. Shindou… please calm down. You're fine. We are just going to give you a check up to make sure every thing else is fine."

"That doesn't change the fact that the world is blurry and trying to devour me up!"

"Err… what? Mr. Shindou, could you please explain in a quieter tone of voice."

"OH MY GOD! They can't understand my voice anymore!"

"No, no, Mr. Shindou, you do not understand what I am trying to say. You are just screaming too loud and I can't make out what you're saying."

"Shit! What's going to happen to my singing career and Bad Luck if nobody can hear my voice?" Shuichi continued to sob. "I can imagine the headlines now! Shuichi Shindou the famous singer for Bad Luck: Lost his voice and doomed to extinction-"

The doctor at this point decided enough was enough. "MR SHINDOU! SHUT THE FUCK UP AND CALM DOWN FOR CHRIST SAKE!"

This did not have the desired effect of momentarily quieting Shuichi, but it did cause him to jump to more conclusions.

"Why does everyone hate me! You're all swearing and yelling at me and ordering me around!" Shuichi is now bawling his eyes out. "You all want me to lead a terribly sad life of crying two times a day, TWO TIMES A DAY! And now I'm breaking my personal record of eleven! What do you want from me? Am I your slave? A captive to your evil hospital plans? A hostage maybe?" Shuichi was now having trouble speaking because he was crying very heavily.

"Please, sir, settle down"

"And now even my name has no relevance to you…you… Dr. Me kill you. Oh God you want to kill me? Don't trouble yourself; I can do it for you!"

Shuichi leapt up from the bed and carefully made his way over to the window. Shuichi took one more breath of air, slid the pane open and jumped.


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Whew... sorry about the cliffi. I'm not even sure its really very cliffi like.

But, i do hope you liked it. So please review and give me your opinions (please don't be too harsh though, its my first fanfic) I'd love any constructive criticizime (can't spell, too lazy to look up). and by the way... Shuichi will end up with either Tohma or Ryuichi. You decide. I would love five or more reviews before i continue. AnywayToodles poodles people! .