Ok, here's another one of my poem/story thingy. To all the people who read
"feelings" and reviewed, you liked it? I thought that people would think it
was cheesy. I dunno. Maybe I am just self-degrading myself again. Well,
since you guys asked for it, I wrote another. This time for Sango and
Miroku. Tomochan, please don't kill me! Anyways, here goes. Read and
review, please! This might be worse than my last one, so go easy on the
flames! Please! Once again, another cheesy romance story. Longer than my
last one.
Together at Last
Sango's POV
I watch him. He moves gracefully. I can't explain these feelings. He turns to me. I feel a flush crawl up my neck. I turn away, hoping he might not see. I feel his eyes on me. I look up shyly again. He IS smiling. I turn my eyes down again, and as he comes closer, my heart races out of control. The blush in my neck rises to my face. He sits next to me. I turn my head the other way. He touches my hand. I turn back to him, my face in his hand. My heart stops for a moment, then beats faster again. I stare into his eyes. I can explain the feelings now. And I know he feels the same too.
Miroku's POV
My thoughts center around one person. Sango. Sango. I feel her watching me. I turn, my heart beating a little faster in hopes that she might feel the same as me. She turns away. I think I see a blush on her neck. I smile broadly. She looks up again. I walk towards her, not sure of what I was doing. My heart beats faster and faster. I see the blush rise to her face. She is lovely with the light blush on her cheek. I sit next to her. I take her hand. Although she does not know it, I am taking her heartbeat. It is beating faster and faster. I lift her face to look at me. I look into her eyes, once again mesmerized by them. And then I know, deep in my heart. We feel the same. And I know she knows it too. And finally, we are together at last.
Ok, there ya go. There it was. It was a little more detailed. read and review, please! Kaede, don't kill me!!!!! Anyways, homework calls. Must go now. By the way, if you could be so helpful and kind as to check one of my other works, I would appreciate it very much! If you didn't like this one, maybe you would like one of my other ones, and if you did like this one, then maybe you too would like one of my other ones! Please read and review! thanks! I must go now! Bai!
Together at Last
Sango's POV
I watch him. He moves gracefully. I can't explain these feelings. He turns to me. I feel a flush crawl up my neck. I turn away, hoping he might not see. I feel his eyes on me. I look up shyly again. He IS smiling. I turn my eyes down again, and as he comes closer, my heart races out of control. The blush in my neck rises to my face. He sits next to me. I turn my head the other way. He touches my hand. I turn back to him, my face in his hand. My heart stops for a moment, then beats faster again. I stare into his eyes. I can explain the feelings now. And I know he feels the same too.
Miroku's POV
My thoughts center around one person. Sango. Sango. I feel her watching me. I turn, my heart beating a little faster in hopes that she might feel the same as me. She turns away. I think I see a blush on her neck. I smile broadly. She looks up again. I walk towards her, not sure of what I was doing. My heart beats faster and faster. I see the blush rise to her face. She is lovely with the light blush on her cheek. I sit next to her. I take her hand. Although she does not know it, I am taking her heartbeat. It is beating faster and faster. I lift her face to look at me. I look into her eyes, once again mesmerized by them. And then I know, deep in my heart. We feel the same. And I know she knows it too. And finally, we are together at last.
Ok, there ya go. There it was. It was a little more detailed. read and review, please! Kaede, don't kill me!!!!! Anyways, homework calls. Must go now. By the way, if you could be so helpful and kind as to check one of my other works, I would appreciate it very much! If you didn't like this one, maybe you would like one of my other ones, and if you did like this one, then maybe you too would like one of my other ones! Please read and review! thanks! I must go now! Bai!
