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Why does the world seem to only cause pain? Ressh was only a child yet the world decided that he was too happy for far too long. He watched with horror as the demon king's blade carved them in half. He trembled as the King turned to him, and said,

"Child. Come with me and learn how to stop unfortunate events such as this in the future."

Ressh stared at the mad-man and slowly shook his head. The smile on the King's face was quickly replaced with a scowl.

Ressh screamed in silent terror as the mad-king ran him through with a bone that was once his mothers.

The Mad-king left the crying child to die.

The child cried into the sky, "WHY!"

Then he fell his vision gone before he hit the ground.

How is it so far? I made this after reading a really good fanfic and decided to try to make one for this. Should I continue? Oh and if you do review then please leave criticism and advice. Thanks!