so this is something i wrote in french..haha..I don't its my first story i've posted to fanfic, but i have many more to come! please let me know what you think!

I couldn't move,

You just took the fall for me, I should be dead but I'm not.

You lie there in a pool of your own blood,

I want to run over to you, but it feels like I'm not moving.

Truth is I am moving, running even, faster than I ever had.

Next thing I know I'm kneeling next to you,

Struggling to keep you're beautiful blue eyes open.

I had to say something,

Why couldn't I?

The words were stuck in my throat, the three words I had to tell you before I lost you forever.

I love you.

It would be that simple, why wasn't it?

I need to try to keep him alive,

I can't loose him.

I can't!

" El! Elliot! Stay with me El. Help is on the way.

Please don't leave me, please! I need you, El.

I love you."

Despite the fact it was hard for him to keep his eyes open,

When I said ' I love you'

His eyes shot open.

"…Liv….? "

It hurt me so much to here him try to speak.

He was trying so hard.

" …I…I lv..yo..to.."

It was nearly impossible to understand him.

But I knew he said I love you.

Tears started to run down my face.

His eyes finally closed.

" Elliot! Elliot, No. You can't leave me! Not now El! Please stay with me!"

It was too late no matter what I tried,

He was gone.

And his last words were ' I love you'

Not to his wife,

But to me.

He said ' I love you'

To me.

The EMT's took him away,

I went home,

Where I cried hours on end.

Thinking about those three simple words.

' I love you'

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