Hey guys!
I've read this story and was absolutely disgusted with how bad it was. So I'm redoing this story. With much better grammar, writing, and plot .
I hope you guys enjoy this version much more. Thank you to everyone who continued to follow and favorite this after I gave up on it. You're the reason I decided to give it another go.
Pairing: Neji (dom) and Gaara (sub), with side Naruto (dom) and Sasuke (sub)
Warning: Swearing, Yaoi (duh), explicit male on male sex, maybe some triggering stuff, such as alcohol abuse, and depression, later on. This is the only time this warning will appear.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. I earn no money from this.
CHAPTER ONE
The club wasn't the best he had been too. The people were too drunk, the music was too loud, and it was overcrowded, but at the moment, he didn't care. He just needed one night to let his hair down. Literally.
It was the third Saturday of the month. The one day a month the 24-year-old set aside for himself and his friends, Sasuke and Shikamaru.
Neji sipped at his tonic and gin, scanning the crowd. His white button-up was covered by a simple grey vest, and some of his more casual black slacks, his long brown hair, down and swaying with his every move. The night didn't seem too promising at the chance for a one night stand so he turned back to his friends.
Shikamaru was lazily drinking his beer while Sasuke just threw back his fifth shot.
"God, I fucking hate that smug fucking, motherfucker." Sasuke said to and about no one in particular. The raven haired man became quite fouled mouth once he got drunk enough.
Shikamaru raised an eyebrow at him, "Maybe you should slow down. I'm not carrying your drunk ass home after last time."
Sasuke just mumbled something about fucking his mother and put his head down and groaned. While the Uchiha could normally hold his alcohol better, it seems the sake bombs were doing a number on their friend and Neji just took his sixth shot and downed it himself.
"HEY! What the fuck you fucker?!"
"You're gonna end up in the hospital again." Neji said as he ordered him a water.
Sasuke just rolled his eyes and turned towards the dancing mass of bodies
"That happened once. You assholes need to stop bringing that up."
"Once is enough." Shikamaru muttered as his took his last swig of beer and stood up. "Well, I'm gonna find something with nice legs to fuck. See you guys tomorrow." With that, Shikamaru wandered into the crowd.
Sasuke was still glaring at the blob of unidentifiable people.
"I'm going home. Give me my keys." Neji shook his head
"I'll call a cab. See you later, Sasuke.."
Sasuke just hn'd and walked away throwing some money down on the counter.
Neji made a quick call to a cab company and watched Sasuke walk out of the bar. The brunet sighed yet again.
Sasuke had reverted back to his alcoholism after him and Naruto broke up. The two were on and off again for about 5 years, but this time, it didn't seem things were going to fix themselves. Sasuke originally started drinking after his parents death, when he was 12. He stopped once he and blond had started dating, their senior year of high school. Despite all their arguing, Naruto had made Sasuke happy. Without the blue-eyed man, Sasuke was back to his bitter and alcoholic self.
Neji sat back and ordered another drink losing himself in thought until someone sat next to him. The longer hair man glanced over and saw, probably the sexiest person he had ever seen. Practically sex personified.
The man had short, messy, red hair that covered the top part of his eyes. He had dark rings of eyeliner, framing his aqua eyes. He was wearing a maroon red, form fitting t-shirt, and black cargo pants. The redhead had a silver chain around his neck, a little jar of sand hanging by the cork.
"Hi." 'Wow Neji, that was lame as fuck. Hi?'
The other man glanced over, "... Hey."
A slightly awkward silence fell over the two for a moment, before Neji spoke up again
"I'm Neji." "Huh?"
Just then Neji seemed to realize that the music was still pounding in both their ears. He couldn't imagine he was easy to hear.
"I'm Neji!" He spoke a little louder and the redhead's lips seemed to faintly turn up. "Gaara."
'Gaara…. It fits him.' Neji looked Gaara up and down. "Let me buy you a drink."
Gaara gave him a quizzical look before nodding, "Why not."
Neji ordered another round of drinks for the two of them. "So… what brings you to a place like this?" Neji inquired. Gaara gave him that look again, "I should be asking you that. You look like you belong in some upper-class bar, not some sketchy night club."
Neji chuckled a bit "My friends enjoy places like this, I just get dragged along."
"What about you? Enjoy places like this?" The shorter man raised watched him carefully. Almost like he was studying the other man.
"For the most part, no. But once a month it gives me a chance to step out of my normal life into something different. Plus I get to meet some interesting characters." Neji winked at the redhead and laughed when he seemed to flush a bit. "What about you? You don't seem like the type to be out partying and drinking."
Gaara smirked a bit, "Shows how well you know me. We just met two minutes ago, how would you know what I'm like?" Neji tapped the side of his head "Maybe I'm psychic." Gaara laughed "You're something alright. I'm not sure if psychic is the word."
Their drinks were set down in front of them, but were ignored. The two would much rather watch the other. Neji brushed some of his brown hair behind his ear, and leaned closer to the aqua-eyed man. "Shows how well you know me. How would you know I'm not psychic?" Gaara leaned in a bit too. "Fine, if you're really psychic. Then predict something. What am I thinking right now?"
Neji hummed softly and closed his eyes "'This might be the sexiest guy I've ever met, I can't believe I'm gonna get fucked by a psychic tonight'"
Gaara smiled and rolled his eyes. "Close. Only one part of that was right." Neji opened his eyes and smirked. "Care to share what part that would be?"
"I'm sure you'll figure that out for yourself later." This only increased Neji's smirk. "Come dance with me Gaara."
He stood and held his hand out to the redhead. Gaara slowly took it and was led to the dance floor.
He was pulled close and the height difference became even more evident while the were standing. Neji reaching 6'2" while Gaara barely stood at 5'4". This embarrassed the younger man slightly and he just glared up at the brunet making him chuckle as he pulled the shorter man to his chest and they danced together. Quickly losing themselves in the music and each other.
The bass pounded through their bodies as they did their best to eliminate the space between them. Other people bumping and pressing them closer together. A light layer of sweat covered them as they grinded and swayed to the beat.
Gaara turned around so his back was against Neji's chest. He started grinding back, his arms reaching up and around so he could lightly pull the long haired man down. Neji groaned softly and pressed his slowly growing erection against the ass grinding on him. He leaned down and started kissing his neck, sucking lightly on a spot behind the redhead's ear, making him moan out, and Neji's dick twitch.
"Want to get out of here?" Neji muttered, hoarsely. Gaara nodded and moaned again grinding back hard, making Neji grip his hips tighter. "Your place or mine?" He said breathlessly.
Neji just grabbed him and dragged him out of the bar, pushing out of the mass of sweaty, horny bodies, to his car.
Gaara pushed him up against the side and kissed him deeply, his hands tangling in the slivered eyed man's hair, pulling lightly. Neji kissed back with as much fervency and grabbed his hips pulling him close. Their erections rubbed together, the two men moaned into the kiss.
Neji fumbled with his keys and got the car doors unlocked. Both of them quickly got in. Neji got the car started and pulled out of the parking lot. He wasn't that drunk, lust seemed to clear him right up. Gaara reached over and started palming his bulge, Neji gripped the wheel tightly and bit his lip, trying his best not to buck into the hand.
The apparently sadistic redhead wasn't done yet. He unzipped the brunet's slacks and reached inside pulling his length out. He gave a few quick pumps and leaned over and licked the bit of pre-cum that had formed at the tip.
Neji nearly swerved off the road and curse under his breath. "Fuck, Gaara.." One of his hands left the wheel and played with the red locks as Gaara took the head into his mouth and sucked lightly. His tongue teased the tip and slowly slipped to the underside of his cock. Neji bucked a bit and had to force himself to keep his eyes on the road and not watch the gorgeous man under him, give him possibly the best blowjob he had ever had.
Gaara hummed and started bobbing his head taking more and more of his each time he lowered his head. This whole time his tongue tracing the veins and teasing the slit at the top.
Neji's foot pressed harder on the accelerator, surely 20 miles over the speed limit by now. He didn't care, though. The slivered eyed man was only focused on getting home, so he could fuck the aqua-eyed man until he didn't remember his own name.
With Neji's hand pushing him down on his harden dick, Gaara was forced to relax his throat as to let the hardened length push down. He swallowed best he could, contracting around the tip and making the taller man curse under his breath again.
"Fuck Gaara I'm going to- FUCK" Gaara took all 10.5 inches of him and swallowed again, Neji's hot cum spilled down his throat and he swallowed every last drop. Gaara sat up again and wiped his mouth, smirking at the Hyuga's flushed, disoriented appearance.
Neji gave a half-hearted glare and drove as quickly as he could to his apartment complex. He pulled up and they both got out quickly, walking to the front door. Neji quickly unlocked it and dragged him to the elevator and pinned him to the wall of it.
Gaara gasped in surprised and pressed against him biting back a moan. Neji kissed him deeply, and the shorter man let him take control, just losing himself in how the brunet made his knees weak with his tongue.
The elevator dinged and the doors slid open and Gaara was lifted up, hands on his ass, his legs had nowhere to go but around Neji's waist. He was carried and pressed against the door and heard keys jingling and the door flew open, them falling to the floor.
Gaara just started laughing, still holding onto him. Neji just on top of him chuckling deeply and kissed him again. Gaara's laughs turned into moaning again as his legs slipped to the floor, his hands back in the long hair tugging a bit.
Neji's hands moved the redhead's shirt up, loving the sounds coming from him. He rubbed the smooth skin, feeling the slightly toned muscles and his dick twitched in his pants. He grabbed the redhead's hips and grinded his erection into his ass as Gaara pulled his shirt off and started unbuttoning his vest.
Neji shrugged off the vest, throwing it to the side and started kissing down his neck, sucking hard on the junction between his neck and shoulder leaving a dark hickey.
Gaara pulled at his hair and used his other hand to unbutton his shirt. "Bedroom. Where?"
Full sentences didn't seem to be an option at the moment.
Neji sat up on his knees, his shirt still half on, hair a complete mess, and grabbed Gaara's hands pulling him up and leading him passed the kitchen and to a bedroom.
Gaara didn't get a chance to look around before he was picked up and placed on the bed. Neji pulled his shirt off the rest of the way and started working on his pants. Gaara took his example and also slipped out of his pants, showing he had gone commando.
Neji stared making the younger man flush a bit. "What are you staring at?" Neji smiled a bit. "Just wondering how I managed to get such a beautiful creature in my bed." Gaara's flush deepened "Stop being so mushy and fuck me please!"
Neji chuckled and pulled off his boxers, reaching over to his bedside table and grabbing lube.
He knelt in front of Gaara and spread his legs pouring some on his fingers, gently pressing against the pink, begging entrance.
He slipped a finger in and groaned at how hot and tight it felt around him. Having to hold back cumming at the thought of his dick inside of him.
Neji heard a soft hiss from the bed and a breathy, "fuck… more." Who was he to deny the gorgeous man anything?
He pressed a second finger in and started to move and scissor them. The sounds coming from the man on the bed were just unholy. Every moan and cry rushing straight between his legs, when Neji finally decided he had been prepped enough.
He stood and crawled onto the bed coating his dick in the jelly substance, spreading the redhead's legs a bit more and placed his tip against the stretched and twitching hole.
Silver eyes met aqua as he began to push in.
Gaara arched a bit, a blush spreading across his cheeks and gripped the sheets tightly, moaning his name. God, that was the hottest thing the Hyuga had ever seen in his life. Neji made a mental note to make sure this wouldn't be a one-night thing.
Neji groaned and continued to push in until his balls met ass. Gaara was already a mess, grinding down on him. "God, move Neji!"
The brunet was happy to comply and pulled out until only the tip was in, slamming back in hard. Just barely missing the younger's prostate.
Gaara screamed and rocked back, letting out a string of curse words. "Again!"
Neji chuckled weakly and pulled out again. "So bossy." He slammed back in, this time hitting that spot dead on. Nej set a fast pace, knowing neither of them was going to last long.
Gaara's eyes were shut tight, his hands shot out and pulled the taller man down into a deep kiss as the assault on his prostate continues. Both of their eyes half opened, staring into the others.
It wasn't long before the redhead pulled out of the kiss and threw his head back, screaming Neji's name as he came all over their stomachs.
Neji followed him quickly, his seed coating the inside of Gaara's ass making him moan weakly.
Neji, as gracefully as he could, fell onto the smaller's chest. His eyes already closing. Both of them were asleep before anything could be said.
Wow that was extremely long, for me anyway. Over 5 pages!
Please leave reviews and favorite! Only flame if you have actual advice on how this can be better, not just to be a dick.
Sorry if there are any mistakes, though it shouldn't be too bad.
Next chapter should be up in a week to a month, sorry. Sometimes I just don't have to motivation.
Love,
Yaoi is Life GYS. (Formally, Gaara lover Neji and Sasuke)
