A/N
After a lot of thoughts on plot changes and getting a bunch new ideas... So I'm re-writing this whole story! XD I'll also be needing some more OCs to fill up the allegiances and stuff... and just so we're clear, it's set in the old forest when Skyclan is there. (sort of an AU world though...)
SO if you have an OC you're willing to donate then just give me their name, clan and some basic details, kay?
Anywho, here's what I've got so far for the new allegiances and prologue! XD
End Notes
Allegiances
Skyclan
Leader:
Vinestar – Long haired cream coloured tom with piercing green eyes
Deputy:
Redfang – Red-brown she-cat with a plumy tail
Medicine cat:
Lightfoot – a pale golden she-cat with a white chest, belly and paws (temporary med cat)
Warriors:
Ghostshadow – a pale grey tom with darker grey splotches
Cloudpelt – fluffy cream she-cat
Apprentice: Applepaw
Cherrynose – long-haired red-brown tom
Greywing – long-haired light grey tabby she-cat
Pineclaw – ginger tom with white paws and belly
Apprentice: Falconpaw
Darkpetal - seal point she-cat
Sharpfang – black tom with white paws and long fangs
Sunflower – golden striped tabby she-cat
Rosethorn - cinnamon point she-cat
Stonetail - striped grey tom
Cougarheart - dark red-brown tabby tom
Briar-rose – dark brown tabby she-cat
Lowbelly - Cream she-cat with very short legs
Hawktalon - Light brown tabby and white tom with piercing, amber eyes
Apprentices:
Applepaw - mottled brown tom
Falconpaw - golden-brown tom with dark brown stripes
Queens:
Dawnfrost – Blue lynx point she-cat with blind blue eyes (med cat)
Willowsnap – tortoiseshell she-cat, mother to Thrushkit (grey tom with black paws) and Mintkit (calico tom with mint-green eyes)
Elders:
Silvermist – beautiful, yet elderly, lilac point she-cat
Frostbite – sharp tongued long-haired white tom
Shadowclan
Leader:
Coalstar – a smoky grey she-cat with intense amber eyes.
Deputy:
Raggedclaw – huge dark brown battle scarred tom with a ruffled spikey pelt.
Medicine cat:
Russetwing – Brown and white tom
Warriors:
Thistleburr – light brown tabby tom
Apprentice: Leafpaw
Gingerpelt - dark ginger tom with white muzzle
Ravenfrost - Black tom with white spots along his back and ice blue eyes
Apprentice: Frogpaw
Greystrike - Dark grey tabby tom
Apprentices:
Leafpaw – tortoiseshell and white she-cat
Frogpaw - Dark ginger tom with yellow eyes
Queens:
Fallenspirit - muddy brown she-cat with white belly and deep green eyes, mother to Shadekit (black she-cat with silver splotches and bright blue eyes) and Silentkit (white she-cat with dark brown muzzle and blue eyes with flecks of amber)
Lilyflower - Tortoiseshell with white she-cat, mother to Smokekit (tall grey tabby tom with blue eyes), Fogkit (small light grey tabby tom with blue eyes), Mistkit (Beautiful silver she-cat)
Elders:
Brightwillow - cranky orange she-cat with a graying muzzle
Windclan
Leader:
Heatherstar – light brown tabby she-cat
Deputy:
Stormracer – Nimble dark grey tabby tom
Medicine cat:
Mapleleaf – Tortoiseshell she-cat
Apprentice: Harepaw
Warriors:
Nightbreeze – smoky grey tom with vivid blue eyes
Duskfang - Smoky black tom with grey point pattern
Sweetspots – Pretty spotted grey she-cat
Clovertail – Calico she-cat
Apprentices:
Harepaw – brown tom
Queens:
Shadepelt – Black she-cat mother of Crowkit (coal black tom) and Ashkit (dark grey tabby she-cat)
Elders:
Longwhisker – old tabby tom
Thunderclan
Leader:
Wolfstar - huge white tom with black patches and amber eyes.
Deputy
Sandclaw - small ginger tabby tom with a white muzzle and yellow eyes
Apprentice: Nightpaw
Medicine cat:
Sootpelt - dark grey tom with bright green eyes
Warriors:
Talonclaw – dark tabby tom with long claws
Apprentice: Icepaw
Apprentices
Icepaw – black and white she-cat with ice-blue eyes
Nightpaw - Dark golden brown tabby she-cat, stripes ranging from black to dark brown to gold, creamy white paws, chest, belly, and tail-tip, dark amber eyes
Queens:
Palewing - pale brown with dark amber eyes, mother to Maplekit (ginger and brown tabby she-kit), Branchkit (long furred brown tom), and Wetkit (grey tom)
Elders:
Riverclan
Leader:
Silverstar - lean silvery-grey tom with white paws
Deputy:
Reedpelt - dark brown tom with light brown chest and belly
Medicine cat:
Pebblestream - spotted grey she-cat
Warriors:
Muddyrain – light brown tom with dark brown paws
apprentice: Ferretpaw
Mintshine - Pale grey she-cat with faint white tabby stripes
Leopardflight - Black she-cat with ginger smudge on her nose
Clawstorm - Thin black tom with long claws
Apprentices:
Ferretpaw - Dark brown tom with cream patches
Queens:
Minnowfur - Gray she-cat with thin black stripes, mother to Blackkit (Small black she-kit with bright green eyes) Hazelkit (Pale brown she-kit with a white tail and paws) and Jaggedkit (Ginger and gray tom with thick, ragged fur)
Elders:
Prologue
Starlight shone over a group of ghostly cats that sat in a circle around a small pool. Their expressions were grim as they looked down into the dark waters, some even appeared frightened at what they saw reflected there.
"We must put a stop to this!" A lean black tom hissed.
"There's nothing we can do Ravenstar! Her power is far too great!" A fluffy silver she-cat wailed fearfully.
Ravenstar's lashed his tail in anger, "Listen to yourself, Froststar! Even if she is one of the two chosen ones, she can't possibly be powerful enough to stop all of Starclan!"
A black and brown she-cat stepped forward, "A mother would do anything to protect her kits, Ravenstar. Her love will give her unprecedented strength. Besides, this prophecy is not ours… how can we know the kit will be a threat?"
"You're joking!" Ravenstar spat, the fur on his back rising. "The very act that created this thing makes it a monster! How can it not be evil? We must kill it before it gains the strength to stand against us!"
Yowls of approval sounded throughout the star-filled clearing, though just as many argued against Ravenstar's words. Starclan was torn, unable to come to a decision and unable to act upon it anyway. Among the throng of arguing cats, a single grey tom with dark tabby stripes sat in silence. Taking a deep breath, he padded up to the water's edge.
"Silence." His mew was not particularly loud, but firm and held authority. The noise died down almost immediately.
"Moongazer." The black and brown she-cat dipped her head in respect. "What do you think should be done? You were the first to receive the prophecy after all."
The tom, Moongazer, swept his gaze over each and every cat before answering, "We cannot stop this kit being born. Its destiny is beyond even our knowledge, but that does not mean it will be tainted in darkness." He paused and set his gaze on Ravenstar. "We will do what we have always done: watch, guide and wait."
And with that, he padded away, leaving the remaining cats to argue amongst themselves once more. Ravenstar watched him leave before turning back to the image reflected in the pool. I hope you're right, Moongazer… for all our sakes.
Far down below, unaware of the turmoil she has caused up in Starclan, a single queen lay sunning herself. She rasped her tongue gently over her swollen belly and purred in content. Her sightless blue eyes were closed as she lay there letting the sun warm he blue-grey fur. An ear twitched at the sound of thunder rumbling in the far off distance.
"Hmm, a storm is coming…" She meowed thoughtfully and felt her kit stirring within her belly. "Don't worry precious," She murmured gently to it. "I'll always protect you."
Tada! Review and review and review plz XD (And thanks ahead for those willing to donate their OCs!)
