So this is my first Fanfiction, please enjoy! Me no own Maximum Ride.
Chapter 1
"Hey mom I'm going surfing!" I yelled as I left our two story house that was on the beach. Heh, aren't I lucky?
"Okay Max, but be back before dark," my mom yelled back.
Her name's Valencia, she's really nice and makes the best chocolate chip cookies ever! By the way I'm Max. Well, actually Maximum, but I prefer Max; and if you ever call me Maximum or Maxie you'd better live near a hospital. Just saying. My sun bleached dirty-blond hair was pulled back in a high pony, so it didn't get in my face when I surfed. I have chocolaty brown eyes (or what my best friend Sam likes to say poop eye colour) and tan skin. I guess I am in shape from all of the sports I do (i.e., basketball, surfing, beach volleyball, swimming, track and field, football, soccer- you name it, I play it). I ran down the dune in my backyard that leads to the beach (Oh by the way, I live in Hawaii, haha I know right you're totally jelly). I was wearing a black bikini but it couldn't be seen because I wore a black Marianas Trench tour shirt over top and white board shorts. I took out my white Blackberry and group texted Sam and Ainsleigh [Sam bold, Ainsleigh italics and Max underlined]:
Surfing now, NE1?
Maxx, really? It's 9:35 in the morning! Thanks for waking me up
Shuddup Calaster
Bring it on Ride ;)
HOW ABOUT BOTH OF U SHUDDUP?
Ains, u kay?
Ugh, no. My younger bros Ratchet and Holden kept me up ALL night. -_-
Sucks to be you :P
You use a lot of emoticons Sam…
U wanna go surfing Ains?
Ah, okay. Gives me time to be away from those Things. If I end up falling asleep please bring me back to shore (:
Max will
LOVE YOU TOO BRO
Rofl
Lol I'm just kidding. I will.
Haha c u guys at da beach. B there in 5.
Haha I'll come too, see you in 10.
Bye
At the beach I saw some people swimming, surfing, and hanging out on the sand. I went over to the bent tree at the beach edge, about twenty Max steps from where I was standing. Going over, I retrieved my surfboard from out of the edge of trees. Left it here from last night, Whoops. My short board was 6'2" all white with blue lines down the right- hand side. Wiping it off, I took the wax out of my ripped brown backpack. After finishing waxing my board, I saw Ainsleigh come up. Her sun bleached blond hair was in her face and her green eyes sparkled. She waved and shouted.
"Yo Max!"
"Hey Ains!" I shouted back.
"You coming?" She pointed to the water.
"Whatta 'bout Sam?"
"Oh he'll find us!" She put her black long board onto the water and started paddling out.
Rolling my eyes, I followed after her. Paddling out to where Ainsleigh was, I sat up with my legs hanging off the rails.
"Off the hook," Ainsleigh whispered excitedly.
"Totally."
The waves were magnificent today, perfect size and shape.
"Race ya," I went back on my stomach and started paddling. Ainsleigh and I were neck and neck (or board to board. Whatever you wanna say). As I saw a wave coming, I pushed down on the nose of my board and went under the wave and surged back up opening my mouth to breath (also known as the Duck dive). The water was nice, and I was energized. Spotting a wave I liked, I paddled out towards it. When I was close, I duck dove through, then turned around so I was now on top of the wave. I kept my balance and did a cutback, and then I went for a snap. Seeing that the wave was coming over top of me I got barrelled and stalled; coming out, I ended the ride by jumping off the board. As I came back up to the surface, I felt confident and proud. Getting back on, I paddled over to Sam, who was coming towards me.
Sam raised his right hand with his pinkie and thumb fingers up, and twisted his wrist back and forth. I grinned.
"Ainsleigh's catching one."
I turned around as Ainsleigh did a pop up, and then a snap, coming back with a re-entry and then hanged ten.
"Woo!" Sam and I clapped and yelled.
As she fell into the water, we paddled over to her.
"Totally wicked," I gave her the Hang Loose sign.
"Awesome," Sam said stunned.
"You goin' for your wave Sammy boy?" she grinned.
"Hah, I'm going to do better than you and Maxie here." He paddled out and waited at the line-up. His blond hair was in a Justin Bieber style, and he wore a Rip Curl black top, with black board shorts. Seeing his perfect wave, he paddled over and duck dove, and turned back and did a pop up, and did a pump, working for an aerial... and he actually got it! His landing wasn't so good though. He did an over the falls, and came back up taking a breath. We paddled over to him, and I grabbed his forearm and pulled him up onto the back of my board. He took off the leash from around his ankle, and Ainsleigh grabbed his short board, pushing it closer to the beach.
"You okay?" I asked.
"Yeah," he grinned.
We paddled back (well Sam and I had to still be sitting up, so it was kinda hard..) and I stuck my board into the sand. The owner of the surf equipment store came over to us.
"Grom and Grommets. Nice surfing out there. Just work on your landing," he clasped Sam on the shoulder. I chuckled lightly.
"You're such a dork," Sam muttered.
"I heard that," I said in a sing-song tone.
"Good," he grumbled.
Ainsleigh looked at her IPhone.
"Dang, gotta go help Ratchet get his head out of the wall."
She rolled her eyes, gave us an apologetic look, and took her board and sprinted off.
"I should go too," Sam stood up and dusted the sand off his shorts.
"Bye Max," he smiled and walked away.
"Bye."
I took my board and headed back home. I was pretty happy until I walked into the kitchen and placed my board down. Then I saw the one and only Jeb.
Tell me watcha think; I hoped you enjoyed it, and please R&R (if you want)
~xAdrenaline Rushx
