1. My best friend knocks out a teacher

This is my first fanfic and i would really appreciate some good constructive criticism. Oh, and I will be updating my chapters constantly, so do not send me a angry p.m. also do NOT trust minecraftFAN. He knows too much.

Bella:

I sooo cannot believe that Paige just knocked out Mr. brown, our geometry teacher. Ya, sure he was evil, but he did NOT deserve to be knocked out by a student. Much less by my best friend, Paige. Paige and i have been best friends since kindergarten (story of that later). Paige is more of a tomboy and is able to beat up almost every guy in our school, including a teacher. So, i was not surprised when he crumpled to the floor with blood coming out of his nose. That set the whole class in shock, no one dared to say a word. "Paige, what the heck was that for?" I whisper. "Well I did see a taser." She replied. "And knockout gas." "That's just crazy. Why would he have those?" I reply. "Well, come see for yourself." She replied. "Fine." I sigh. Well when we got to the computer, she was right, there were weapons and also for some random reason a glowing green orb. "Let's check it out." Said Paige. "No wait." I say as I reach for her hand as she picked up the orb, and the next thing I knew we were being burned by fire and then being frozen stiff by liquid nitrogen. And then I felt like I was being cut open by a huge, glowing, purple knife. And then I blacked out.

When I woke up we were surrounded by some kind of monsters. "Umm, Paige you awake yet? Cause we seem to be surrounded by zombies, spiders, and skeletons" I ask her."hmm...we are about to get killed, unless I figure out a way to outsmart the monsters," she replies."well, hurry up!"I groan as an arrow gets me in the arm." okay, I'm thinking of something." she replies. I'm about to ask her something and right then I get poisoned. Intense pain is all I feel. "Paige?" I whisper. "Owwww... I just got poisoned" she whispers back. The last thing I hear before I black out is the clash of a sword against bones.