Title: Seduction
and Love
Author: fbi-woman
Rating: K / PG or
whatever
Type: MR
Spoilers: Don't read if you
haven't seen the movie lol.
Disclaimer: I
own nothing and I'm not claiming to. This is just an original work
inspired by a movie.
Summary: About Satine during the
Sparkling Diamonds / Elephant Love Medley area of the movie.
A/N:
I'm really not sure how I feel about this one. I've rewritten it
A LOT lol and I'm still not sure it's right. I really hate not
having my poems rhyme and not writing in triplets, but I suppose I
can't do that forever lol. This is actually potentially for a
contest on one of my forums, so please let me know what you think.
And please, try to be constructive, even if you hate it. Flaming
isn't going to help.
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Descending from heaven
To dance with the devil
Fiery curls frame porcelain skin
Bloodstained lips and innocent eyes
A thing of beauty
She tempts dark desires
The brilliant actress
Filling every man's dreams
Her voice fills the room
And echoes in the streets
Lost in her song
The audience of sinners
A sparkling fantasy
Teases their eyes
The star of the night
Their temporary toy
They buy her love
Then leave her behind
None of them know her
None of them care
Through sequins and smiles
Only one man can see her
The girl in a cage
Who dreams she might fly
If she gives him a chance
And lets herself fall
At least in the daylight
This love could save her
