Title : Red End

Plot : Patrick Jane vs Red John : who will win ?

Disclaimer : I own nothing and bla bla bla

Writer's notes : It's a short story in two chapters. Actually, I've translated Red End story in English from original in French. English is not my birth language so, I apologize already for my mistakes. I hope it'll be comprehensible anyway ! Good reading ! And please, leave me reviews ! ;)


RED END

In the middle of the Californian countryside, an old farm was surrounded by marksmen. Armed to the teeth, the SWAT was slowly coming towards the building. Next to their sides, agents Van Pelt, Rigsby and Cho looked each other, worried.

Inside the farmhouse, the atmosphere was heavy. Red John held back Lisbon, a knife under her throat. The fear could see on her face. Her life could stop right now, right here, in this farm, in front of Jane who was stood, as terrified as her. Both of them knew what Red John was able to. He proved it so many times… Sweat was dripping along her temples. Her respiration was halting. She was trying to control herself but it was hard. She was in psychopath hands, which cut many throats before hers… Lisbon closed her eyes. She's wondering why he didn't kill her yet…

Jane was stood in the middle of the room, hands up. In front of him, Red John was smiling with a sadistic smile. He was savoring the situation. Game's over. Jane's lost. He found out his identity at least, after he has unfair insulted him of ugly, tormented and sad little man in front of millions of viewers. It'd pissed him more than ever. So much that he'd decided to take a good revenge on this fake-psychic.

The two men were confronting each other. Jane refused to keep quite in front of this monster. He was promised himself he'll catch Red John and he'll catch him.

"Let her go" Jane asked with a voice not as assured as he wanted. "You want me…"

Jane took a step forward. So Red John leaned more intensely the knife on Lisbon throat, which's starting to suffocate.

"One step more and I kill her !" Red John warned. "It'll be very sad beside your wife and child, you've agent Lisbon death on your conscience !"

Lisbon looked at Jane with desperate. Jane swallowed his saliva and clenched his jaw. Red John wasn't wrong. He'll never recover if Lisbon died because of him. He felt already guilt enough with his wife and daughter… Lisbon helped him so much. She's always covered up for him from Minelli, she's always took his defense even against Bosco. He's always known he could count on her. She didn't deserve to end up in this situation. She didn't deserve to die.

Jane was looking Lisbon, sorry. His envy of revenge was too strong. He couldn't let go Red John again. He couldn't. It was too hard for him. He had to avenge his family.

Jane took off hardly his eyes from Lisbon. Her entire life depended of him right now. His heart bet up very fast. He felt it in his chest. Just like the night, were he's found Red John's note on his room door. He's just understood he's committed the best error of his life… Jane closed his eyelids. He had to do abstraction of this terrible memory. Lisbon life was in danger. He breathed and concentrated himself, and then he looked deeply into his family torturer eyes.

"You want me" Jane repeated. "So, let Lisbon out of this story. Why to kill her ?"

"You care about her, right ?" the killer replied.

Jane staggered under the blow. He turned towards Lisbon and stared at her, a nostalgic smile on the lips. In spite of a cohabitation beginning a little difficult, he had to recognize they've finally tamed each other.

"So, you'll see her dying." Red John said cruelly while he was going to cut Lisbon throat.

"Noooo !!!!!!!" Jane screamed throwing on him.

In the meaning time, the door suddenly opened on SWAT men. Some screams and shots were heard. Then, nothing more…


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