The Dauntless burst out of the door leading to the Choosing Ceremony and run down the street towards the train. I gather my red dress in my hands and run after them kicking off my shoes as I run. I run to the front of the crowd with the other Dauntless, thanking myself that I practiced running before I transfered. We stop at the tracks and start to climb, once we get to the platform on top we only have a second or two before thee train comes around the corner. We take off running again and as the train passes we jump inside, the Dauntless born jump in first and I jump in the car in between the transfers and Dauntless born. I swing myself inside and sit on the floor of the cart waiting for what is next.

Not even five minutes later I hear people yelling again so I look outside the door to see people jumping out of the cart in front of me. When the rooftop that they were jumping on top of comes to me, I go all the way back, fear tearing at my emotions and I sprint out of the cart. I push with my foot off of the cart and I land on the rooftop on my side and roll. I get up and see that my brand new red dress is torn but I didn't care, I hated the colors red and yellow. I run over to where the rest of the people were. They were surrounding a man, blond hair slicked back in the middle, the sides shaved, he had piercing in his ears and one eyebrow piercing, weird. " Listen up!" His voice boom and the whole rooftop was silent," If you want to get into Dauntless, this is the way in," He says and points off the side of the building," If you don't have the guts to jump, well," He pauses and looks around the crowd and his eyes land on me. He smirks," Then you don't belong here. The transfers get to jump first," He says and looks around the crowd again.

" No one?" He quirks up an eyebrow," I will," I say before I even know what i'm doing, " A hippie?" He questions and I walk up," She's not even wearing shoes!" Someone comments and the crowd starts to laugh. I ignore the comment and look over the side of the building, looking into nothing but a big, black abyss in the pavement," Today initiate," The man says and I look over to him, now noticing how much more attractive he is now that i'm closer up. I look away and step up onto the side of the building that is barely half a foot in width, I take a deep breath and fall into the, I hope not, endless abyss.

Hi! Ok so this is my first Fanfic, but I promise if I can get enough reviews I will make the chapters longer, I just want to see if it's good enough so far to continue on!