This is my second poem and I hope that people like it. Also a little more reader respons would be apreciated. So flame if you must but PLEASE R and R!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 192 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/22/2001 - id: 365384
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My advice is to run while you still can
My advice is to run while you still can. All this is is a
sleep deprived teens sudden attack of inspiration. But then again maybe you
will like this poem. All I know is that when the inspiration struck I had to
write. You know that may one day be the cause my downfall, not being abele to
control my creative… Ohhhhhhhh who cares what the creative thingy is it is just
keeping me up at night and making me very mad.
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Lord of
illusions
Night and day
sit in your eyes
The clouds intertwine in your hair
You move with the grace of the ocean
You smile with the innocence of a child
Your heart holds the secrets the stars will
never know