One Sweet Day
A/N: Hello, I redid the whole plot of this story. Hope you'll like this one. This is my first full ccs story, so please be nice.
Reviews will be so much appreciated, but please no flames, but "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM". Enjoy!!!
Disclaimer: I would like to say this only once. I do not own ccs the ppl from clam do, but I can wish right? I do own the
plot though. Please don't sue because I'm just a teenager that is broke.
(___) me talking
___ thoughts
"___" character speaking
***** scene changes
~~~~ Old man's story
%%%% End of Ch. or story
And Our Story Begins.................
A man of about the age of 50 was walking through the Sakura Park. He stopped to admire the beautiful fountain. The
fountain was made of marble and had two different water fall, one big, one small (have you seen those champagne glass
stacked up with wine flowing down, that's what it looks like). On the top was a sculpture of a heart with wings. The
fountain brought back some sad memories to the old man. He sat down on a near by bench. The memories came flooding
back to him.................
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A boy at the age of 18 with messy chestnut hair and amber eyes stood by the swings. He was waiting for someone,
someone he had to confess something to. He was waiting nervously, it was getting pretty dark, but he couldn't wait
another day, he had to tell her.
Tell her how how he had loved her since after their card capturing days. How she change him from a cold hearted person
to what he is now. Her kindness towards others, her laughter and cheerfulness melted his cold heart, especially her
smile.
He sat down on a swing, it's been 45 mins. since she said she would be here. Where is she? I'll wait 15 more minutes
before I leave.
Little did he know what had just taken place in those 45 mins.
****** 45 mins. *****
A girl of the age 18 with short auburn hair and emerald eyes was running down the stairs. She was already late meeting
someone. She grab her keys and went to say good bye to her Otousan and Oniichan.
"I'm off now, be back home later," she yelled.
"Good bye Sweetie," replied her Otousan.
"Sakura you better not let that Gaki do anything to you or else!!!!" shouted her Oniichan.
"Oniichan!!! His name is Syaoran, not Gaki!!!!" she yelled, stomped on his foot and left.
***** In the car *****
It was getting pretty late she thought, whatever Syaoran had to tell her must be important.
She turned on the radio to keep her company. As she was doing this she didn't notice the car that was heading straight
for her. When she saw the car it was too late and her last thoughts before darkness filled her vision was Syaoran.
%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% And Our Story Stops.....Just For Now %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
Me here again. Did you think it was good, bad or okay? Pls review, the more I get the faster I'll update. Give you thoughts,
opinion and ideas for the story. Sorry if the characters are not to their real personalities, I tried my best!!(Waaaaaaahhhhh)
I've only seen the American dub version of ccs, I know it sucks. I am planning to get the tapes that are in Japanese w/
subtitles. Also sorry for the wrong grammar and spelling. Thanx goes out to all who read and reviewed the first version
of Ch. 1. It was great reading your reviews, hope you read this version!! Hope u enjoyed reading the first Ch. more to
come soon.
Buh Bai
Angel Of Dreams
A/N: Hello, I redid the whole plot of this story. Hope you'll like this one. This is my first full ccs story, so please be nice.
Reviews will be so much appreciated, but please no flames, but "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM". Enjoy!!!
Disclaimer: I would like to say this only once. I do not own ccs the ppl from clam do, but I can wish right? I do own the
plot though. Please don't sue because I'm just a teenager that is broke.
(___) me talking
___ thoughts
"___" character speaking
***** scene changes
~~~~ Old man's story
%%%% End of Ch. or story
And Our Story Begins.................
A man of about the age of 50 was walking through the Sakura Park. He stopped to admire the beautiful fountain. The
fountain was made of marble and had two different water fall, one big, one small (have you seen those champagne glass
stacked up with wine flowing down, that's what it looks like). On the top was a sculpture of a heart with wings. The
fountain brought back some sad memories to the old man. He sat down on a near by bench. The memories came flooding
back to him.................
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A boy at the age of 18 with messy chestnut hair and amber eyes stood by the swings. He was waiting for someone,
someone he had to confess something to. He was waiting nervously, it was getting pretty dark, but he couldn't wait
another day, he had to tell her.
Tell her how how he had loved her since after their card capturing days. How she change him from a cold hearted person
to what he is now. Her kindness towards others, her laughter and cheerfulness melted his cold heart, especially her
smile.
He sat down on a swing, it's been 45 mins. since she said she would be here. Where is she? I'll wait 15 more minutes
before I leave.
Little did he know what had just taken place in those 45 mins.
****** 45 mins. *****
A girl of the age 18 with short auburn hair and emerald eyes was running down the stairs. She was already late meeting
someone. She grab her keys and went to say good bye to her Otousan and Oniichan.
"I'm off now, be back home later," she yelled.
"Good bye Sweetie," replied her Otousan.
"Sakura you better not let that Gaki do anything to you or else!!!!" shouted her Oniichan.
"Oniichan!!! His name is Syaoran, not Gaki!!!!" she yelled, stomped on his foot and left.
***** In the car *****
It was getting pretty late she thought, whatever Syaoran had to tell her must be important.
She turned on the radio to keep her company. As she was doing this she didn't notice the car that was heading straight
for her. When she saw the car it was too late and her last thoughts before darkness filled her vision was Syaoran.
%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% And Our Story Stops.....Just For Now %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
Me here again. Did you think it was good, bad or okay? Pls review, the more I get the faster I'll update. Give you thoughts,
opinion and ideas for the story. Sorry if the characters are not to their real personalities, I tried my best!!(Waaaaaaahhhhh)
I've only seen the American dub version of ccs, I know it sucks. I am planning to get the tapes that are in Japanese w/
subtitles. Also sorry for the wrong grammar and spelling. Thanx goes out to all who read and reviewed the first version
of Ch. 1. It was great reading your reviews, hope you read this version!! Hope u enjoyed reading the first Ch. more to
come soon.
Buh Bai
Angel Of Dreams
