A TOUR TO REMEMBER

CHAPTER 1


'Just remember to smile, smile smile and turn the world around', Tom's lovely voice sang through my speakers.

'Oh god I love this song', I sighed. There's no way I could ever see them…

'Je m'appelle Dougie Poynter', my phone sounded. A signal of me receiving a text message so I grabbed my phone and opened the message only for my eyes to widen, my mouth to drop and stare at it in shock.

'Flor! You will NOT believe this…McFly's doing a South American tour! :D', it read.

'AAAAAAAAAAAH!', I yelled.

It's hard to explain how happy I am right now. McFly are my heroes. They've always been…

But the hard thing is that they're a band from the united kingdom and I live in Argentina which means that I live at the other side of the world!

They've never been here before so I am so happy that there's finally a chance for me to meet my idols!

So after I calmed down a bit I called my friend Rachel who texted me to get more information.

'Rach! How are you?', I said as she picked up her phone and greeted me back.

'I'm sooooooo super excited!', I chuckled at that, I knew how excited she was.

'Me too! How did you know?', I asked her referring to the text message she sent me.

'Tom just tweeted it', she explained.

'He did? Wait let me check', I said and I logged in to twitter.

'tommcfly - South America, are you ready for tour? #McFlyGoesSouthAmerican', was Tom's last tweet. I retweeted it and replied.

'fletchermania - tommcfly OMG! You're finally coming to South America! We love youuu 3' and within a few seconds I got hundreds of retweets.

'Wow!', I said.

'What?', Rachel replied and I instantly forgot that I was still on the phone with her.

'Check your timeline! And I'm going to hang up, we can talk online', I quickly said as I hung up.

'mcflyerrachel1D – Excited for #McFlyGoesSouthAmerican with fletchermania ', Rachel just tweeted and I retweeted it.

Suddenly my mentions were filled with tweets like this:

'fletchermania omg you're so lucky!'

'fletchermania meet you at #McFlyGoesSouthAmerican ! :D'

I didn't know what all of this was about seeing that I didn't have that much followers so I just kept reading them until I came to this particular tweet that made my day.

'tommcfly - fletchermania Sorry for the wait lovely, We love you toooooo 3 #McFlyGoesSouthAmerican'.

OH.

MY.

GOD!

Tom Freaking Fletcher has just retweeted & replied to me!

'!', I yelled, It might sound weird and totally silly but I just got noticed by my idol and that means the world to me.

'What's going on in here?', my mum said as she came into my room. I forgot that I wasn't the only one at home.

'Nothing mum, I'm sorry for worrying you but McFly is finally coming to South America and Tom has just talked to me!', I was really happy and my mum knows how obsessed I am with McFly and especially Tom so I saw her smile creeping up.

'Thank god, I thought something was wrong', she laughed.

'Mum?', I said.

'Yes dear', she answered.

'Could I go?', I asked her, I knew that she understood my obsession for McFly and all but she was a parent after all and of course I needed permission to go and my parents are very strict so I really hope that she would say yes because this is a once in a life time!

'Flor, you know that's not up to me…', she sighed and I knew she was speaking the truth.

'If it was up to me I would definitely say yes and I would even drive you there and go with you if you wanted to…but you'll need to ask your father when he's home', she exclaimed and I sighed at that…that's going to be hard! How am I going to explain my dad that my heroes are going to be here for a concert and I really have to go when he didn't even approve me of going to the school's prom?

'Don't worry, I know this is very important for you and I will definitely help you out', mum smiled and she kissed the top of my forehead and left my room.

This is going to be so hard…I cant wait for my dad to come home…I really need to ask him but I'm afraid that he'll say no…

'fletchermania – Cant wait for the #McFlyGoesSouthAmerican tour…waiting for daddy to come home…hope I can go ', I tweeted and signed out of twitter to continue making my homework. I really have a lot of homework to do for tomorrow…even though I probably wont concentrate properly on it…I have to finish it!

'I'm home!', I heard my dad shout and the front door closing afterwards. Wow I didn't realize I was doing my homework for so long. I really did need to tell him but it's been a long day and he had to work all day so I think I'm saving it for dinner. I casually went downstairs to greet my dad.

'Hi papi, how was your day?', I said as I gave him a kiss on the cheek.

'It was good, tiring but good, and yours? How was school?', he asked.

'It went ok, I received an 8 for my math exam', I smiled at him, I guess I had to please him a bit before asking the question also so he would be in a better mood.

'Good girl', he smiled as he got his shoes off and walked to the kitchen to greet my mum. This might work…I thought as I slowly followed him towards the kitchen and helped my mum with preparing the table for dinner.

So we just ate in silence for a few minutes and I took a sip from my water before asking 'the big question'.

'Dad?', I slowly asked him.

'Yes?', he answered as he took another bite.

'You know McFly right?'.

'Yes…your silly little obsession', he answered. And I tried not to respond to that and correcting him how its not a 'silly little obsession'. I just ignored it and continued my interrogation.

'You know they're from Europe right?', I simply asked.

'Would you please get to the point Flor?', my dad was almost getting annoyed.

'They're coming to South America and I was wondering if I could go and see them in concert?', I asked him, putting a huge smile on my face. He didn't say anything for a few minutes…he just ate in silence as I was still staring at his face, waiting for an answer.

'If you pay for it yourself, you might go…but take Rachel with you', he decided and I was shocked.

'What?', I said, wide-eyed.

'I said that you may go, you have my permission…that's what you want right?', he said it as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.

'Thanks dad! I'm going to call Rachel right now', I hugged him and put my plate in the dishwasher on my way back upstairs to call her.

We called for about half an hour, talking about how excited we were for the concert and what we were going to wear and we were just having random fan girl moments.

She had to go so we said our goodbyes and hung up.

I signed into twitter and read some of my mentions, followed some people back and then send a tweet.

'fletchermania – Have daddy's permission for #McFlyGoesSouthAmerican tommcfly are you ready? :D'

I logged off and decided to have an early night as I was exhausted of being excited


A/N: HIYA! I'm sorry i haven't been posting anything for a WHILE! I started a new story (this one). It's as you can see, a McFly fanfiction. I already wrote LOADS for it, i started it as a One Shot but it ended up being sooooo long that i figured it'd be better to turn it into a real fanfiction. Please tell me what you think by leaving a review. You don't need an account to review, you can review 'anonymously' as well. Just remember to put your name in it so i'll know it's you. Also, if you have twitter, put your username in the review and i'll tweet you every time i post a new chapter :)

For the ones who are reading my other McFly story 'I Should Have Known' and the sequel 'Foolish'. Foolish hasn't ended by far! I am just on a writer's block for it...it won't be much longer though, maximum 20 chapters i think but it might be shorter as well.

If there are any 1D fans reading, I wrote 2 one shots so far 'Our Very First Kiss' is a Harry Styles one shot and 'It's Gotta Be Me' is a Liam Payne one shot. I also am still working on a 1D fanfiction: 'One Thing', it's no where near ending though i have writer's block for that too. I hope i'll make up of the lack of updating by this story and making chapter 5 of One Thing extra long. Sorry again for the wait but i'm still alive ;)

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