Hey this is my sample of the Re writen First chapter of No one Important.
Yea i changed the name to "Difficult" It suits where I want it to go. :)
DIFFICULT.
CHAPTER ONE.
AYLA'S POV.
"Alice.. Alice... Alice... SIT DOWN!" I shouted the last part, and apart from a few grumpy looks, no one cared or noticed. The girl who was pacing up and down the gate lounge stopped and slid into a seat.
"I hate flying. I mean, what if we crash? or there's terrorists..." I grabbed her hand and Leah grabbed the other. She slowly went quiet, giving me an opportunity to speak.
"We will land safely. I promise." I looked her in the eye and she nodded. All three of us fell silent, not wanting to say anything in case it started Alice up again.
"All first class passengers on flight 845 to London are now free to board the plane through gate 67." Me and my friends all looked at each other and grabbed our backpacks and we made our way forward and moved through the gate, an Air hostess leading the way. Even Alice seemed to relax as the three of us had light-hearted banter, being loud and silly as usual. I guess we all thought we were going to be in the first class alone, as no one had entered before us, and we didn't see anyone enter afterwards, so you could guess the scare we got when we saw the faces of 5 teenage boys staring at us. They were good looking faces too.
The one on my closest left had his brown hair messy, but in a styled way so it looked perfect, he had light stubble and his eyes were a greying blue, but had a spark in them, like he was up to no good, I could see the stripes on his shirt. The next boy on my left had the same brown hair, although his was styled in a Justin Bieber cut, but he had wavy hair. His eyes were brown and warm, his smile shy. The next boy I saw was a stunner, his jet black hair was pushed up through the middle, the sides shaved short. His cheekbones where high and his brown eyes were cloaked with long dark lashes. I followed his line of sight, and he had his eyes on Leah, who couldn't blame him. The girl was gorgeous, with her long caramel hair lying pin straight, and her brilliant blue eyes standing out against her toned skin. I didn't mind he was watching her, he looked like a bad boy to me. Not my type.
The next two i saw were more to my liking, the first had blonde hair, though at the roots you could see brown. His eyes were a deep shade of blue, glistening with innocence as he looked into my own eyes. The boys' grin was cheeky, and his slightly crooked teeth just made him that much more adorable. The next boy, last but not least, had chocolate brown curls, and bright green eyes, which were looking straight at me, just like the last boy. His grin was flirtatious, and I noticed the dimples that stood out when he smiled.
Of course, in reality, all of this information I took in only took one glance, though I felt like I'd been standing there for hours, not milliseconds.
"Uh... Hi." I awkwardly gave a single wave when I realised the other two wouldn't say anything, well Leah wouldn't, Alice was to worried about the plane crashing and texting her boyfriend Zak that she didn't even notice the guys, just kept walking till she got to her seat.
"Why hello!" The boy who I'd first seen stood and grabbed my hand and shook it so hard and fast my whole arm moved.
"I'm Louis. That's Liam, Zayn, Niall and Harry." He pointed to each boy in turn, who either waved or said their own hellos.
"I'm Ayla, That's Leah - " I kicked her in the back of her leg to snap out of her Zayn-trance. "And... the one who didn't notice you is Alice."
"It's lovely to meet you." This time it was the curly one- Harry- who spoke.
"You guys too." I grinned and made my way over to my seat, which was just in front of Harrys' so I settled in and then turned and lent over the back of my chair and looked at Harry, who smiled up at me.
"How'd you get in here? We didn't see anyone enter before or after us." I peered at him, and he smiled that same amazing smile.
"We came through an hour or so ago." I raised my eyebrows at him.
"How-and why- did you do that?" I was shocked, that only happened to really famous people, so 5 teen boys? Unlikely.
"We have our ways." He winked at me and I stuck my tongue out at him before turning back into my own seat for taxi. I don't think I was thinking straight, because I didn't realise he only answered half my question. My happy emotions were overriding. I could just feel that this would be a good flight.
