I guess this is my first story, even if it's kinda a small writing right now, but I do plan to actually make this a story with chapters like the first one you are currently able to read be more of a collection of thoughts from characters. Reviews and pointers on things would be very appreciated, though please to be fair and courteous about it as I'm just a fairly modest writer who counts themselves as a rookie who has much to learn still.


It's the flawed person who tries their best when they know their not the best. It's the weak person who grows stronger with their weak, broken, or tired soul from all the blows that the world may throw at them... yet they sill get up.

It's the person who looks back to their wrongs, their sins, their flaws to understand how to be better and understand another when they do wrong when they try to do right, to forgive those who wish to only do right but fail to do it the right way.

The experience that allows those to pick up another who endures and fall upon their knees from being overwhelmed...and know what to say to them since you know all too well how it feels...

This world may be cold, dark, and unforgiving from all those who wish not to understand, those who care not to understand our pain, care not for the weak or flawed in their sight, care not to forgive nor accept. They have no respect if they think not of their words or actions and how forward affect us... not until... they fall to their lowest and beg for mercy they never gave us...

Do you think they can change if you gave them mercy... or would you strike them down so they can't inflict more pain on others...?

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Actually, here's a better question... Do you think they will accept the price of mercy and themselves even if they're going to die or be judged anyways? Would you help them and forgive every mistake they may make on the road to redemption?

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To be truthful, this world could be better if we all learned to do right instead of let greed, hate, fear, and other things that make important decisions become quite rash... It's because those who reject things they don't know or understand and neglect responsibilities on important things or do them without thinking right is why we have things such as chaos and mistrust... even if sometimes we do things that are not exactly right for the best of reasons... to keep things peaceful or better with a price...

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Oh well it doesn't really matter now, we all have free will to do as we may please, and what done is already done... all we have is to look forward to is the future now...so to speak anyway as it is plain fact...so...

What shall you do my dear fallen, what shall you choose to do...?