Hey everybody I decided to rewrite the story and try to improve it. I'm working on the second chapter and I am still having some trouble coming up with the third chapter but I can feel that I'm getting close. I hope you enjoy the rewrite!


Chapter 1 Waking Up

There was a wind blowing through the city streets that matched perfectly with the dark gray clouds dancing in the sky. A drop of water fell from the clouds and dived on the hard cement floor with a plop. Then millions of water drops came falling down joining the first. The water then became a puddle and soon formed into a raging flood. Thunder booming in the streets lightning flashing all over the city. The drops of rain making a loud pitter patter sound on the roofs beating his ears making them ring.

He soon sat up from his bed with messy hair and a displeasing look on his face. Annoyed by the sound of the storm he got up and got dressed. He took a white buttoned shirt and black long jeans with a black hoodie. He walked to the window seeing the clouds and a large amount of water on the ground. He walked outside and put his hood above his head to shield him from the rain. He wondered why it was so gloomy outside, during the day it was sunny and not a single cloud in the sky the color scarlet just like Erza's hair.

He had realized that the water was rising quickly making him lose his train of thought. If he didn't find shelter soon he would soon be drowning. He then saw a a tall abandoned building he sensed a dark energy emitting from it. The building was dull and worn out wooden boards nailed onto the windows covering them and the door also seemed to be covered. He saw a small opening on the second window that he could fit into. He put his foot on the first board of wood and put his other foot on the second board, putting pressure on each of his foot as he started climbing up and used bricks that were sticking out of the building to help him get to the second window.

He crawled into the hole that seemed to be a just a little bit too small but he fitted right through. He looked around and heard the creaking of the wood and quiet footsteps. Thinking if there was someone else here or just a figment of his imagination. He heard the footsteps coming closer and a dark figure emerging from the shadows. To his surprise it came to be a average height, red headed woman wearing armor. Her armor reflecting the light of the moon blinding him. He soon saw that it was a good friend of his Erza Scarlet.

"Erza? What are you doing here?"


Thanks for reading my story!