Hey, guys! This is the first story I've ever written. I've never been a good writer in my opinion, so if you hate it, I understand! I've never been on for English. I'm definitely a math person! Anywho, I'd LOVE some constructive critisism. Thanks much!
Disclaimer: I don't own Bones. I asked for it for my birthday, which was Sunday! yayaya, but sadly I didn't get it. I did get the DVDs though! And I didn't get that ponyy..sad.
Also, I don't own 'Just a Dream', which is the song used in this. It's by Carrie Underwood, and is beautiful! I suggest you listen to it.
Baby why'd you leave me
Why'd you have to go?
It had been 4 days since that single shot had rang out in the Checkerbox. 4 days since she saw the man she had depended on for 3 years crumple to the floor 4 days ago, she changed. But she couldn't go back. Because of 4 days ago, she couldn't go back to being who she was, what she was. 4 days earlier, she felt loved.
Now all she felt was empty
I was counting on forever,
now I'll never know I can't even breathe
4 days ago, she had considered telling him what she wanted from him.
4 days ago, she wanted him to tell her what she was to him.
4 days ago, she wanted to be more than partners.
Now all she had was a funeral and a lifetime of what-could-have-been's
It's like I'm looking from a distance
Standing in the background
Everybody's saying, he's not coming home now
This can't be happening to me This is just a dream
4 seconds ago, her doorbell rang.
4 seconds ago, she got up from her position on the couch, where she was letting the tears flood her eyes.
4 seconds ago, she thought he was gone.
4 seconds ago. 4 seconds ago.
4 seconds ago, she didn't think she'd ever feel his sweet embrace again.
He's coming home now.
Alright, now review! Muchos Gracias!
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