hi guys,well i have written several bits and bobs on here,i have recieved lovely feedback and it has been on my mind for a while to write more. i personally connected with Rorschach the first time i read watchmen and the film,well it just pure blew me away.. i wont lie, i enjoy writing about him as hes just so un completed as a character many if and buts and possibilities surround him,hes like clay, un moulded and with such a tortured soul,i do detest manhattan for doing what he did you can fold the very fabric of the universe and yet you kill a man...well this is a new world where that does not happen. a bit of fun for the fanfic universe, as in the end if we cant fold the fabric and lives within the pages of a book,the minds alternate universes ,then wheres the fun in playing god.. aye manhattan?

i knew i didnt have long. i knew how this story ended and i couldnt allow it. i would not allow it to happen. technically i knew what i was about to do was madness but the universe had bigger plans and i was a cog in the ever moving machine and it was not for me to argue. I had once talked back and given my opinion and had been given a scar as a reminder my job was to do and not question. To some on the earth i would be considered a god, but to my masters i was a mere soldier, following orders to ensure the safety of the blessed mankind. i personally had watched mankind for eons and didnt think them worthy of saving. i would have left them to lucifer and let them fight it out amongst themselves for an eternal position next to the creators themselves if it were up to me. it isnt. Today my mission is to save a pure soul. his name is Walter and he is my keep. i have kept him safe all his life, not that he knows it. Today i must stop that monster, that earth created demon who struts around thinking he has ascended above mankind to something special. Manhattan, today you learn a lesson in humility and the danger of pride. I salute my shining masters and dive into the portal. A human body could not survive this journey that is the reason they have to be dead, for the soul to travel either way. Up or down. In truth there is no direction but humans think of it in terms that are simple, and we merely humour them and have picked up the terms they use. A source of amusment for us. I smile to myself I do enjoy walters life. It will be a pleasure to see him again. He will not remember me, He never does and there is a small part of me that wishes he did but it cannot be, it would drive him to madness if he did.

A burning sensation all over my now solid form, skin growing, hair, eyes, hands, a heart, lungs filling with air,blood pumping, touch, heat and cold. an astral form knows all and none of these sensations all at once but the human form only handles a few at a time. I am not human but i am in a flesh body now. I know the exact moment i will make contact with walter and how it will appear to all others. I am ready. my thoughts forming to human patterns of communication. My last link with my masters my mind signals and brightness so hot it burns the eyes of this form. I see Walter i shoot towards him from the ethereal realm and embrace his form as the blue monster changes reality to destroy my keep, i embrace him in my arms, tight i hold my pure friend as i know he will struggle and we seemingly vanish.

yes you got it. walter has a guardian angel. hope you enjoyed? chapter 2 currently under way. walter meeting his guardian angel. any ideas? i would love to hear any feeback,good or bad. oh and apologies im on a netbook with no spellcheck working from wordpad so its difficult. please bare with me. hoping for a laptop from santa.