White Angels in Prison
I'm busy with work so progress may take time. Later chapters will be longer then chapter 1 but I want to keep each chapter short and sweet as possible.
I want to give Yeonhwa some reasons for being crazy which will be revealed in this fanfic and to make her character more developed and sympathetic. Yeonhwa being lonely as a kid isn't a compelling reason for her attacking her sister, I feel the author Gado could have shown more of her childhood and shown how Yeonhwa became what she is.
Yeonhwa is my fav character in white angels but I wish she was able to redeem herself before the story ended so I decided to write this story. Yeonhwa seems to be a sociopath but it's possible she could change if Ayeon was a positive influence on her and if the author had decided to continue the story.
Also I think people should have learned Dahye's true nature as a bully and she should have been punished for strangling and beating up Yoonseo repeatedly.
In this story Yeonhwa will end up being taller then Dahye due to Dahye's smoking stunting her growth.
The model Nastya Zhidkova is like a real life version of Yeonhwa, she is considered to be the most beautiful albino in the world.
- TimeMask
Chapter 1 The angels victims
4 weeks after Yeonhwa is imprisoned.
Baek Yeonhwa hurt everyone she become close with even her sister, time heals all but for Yang Dahye she is still suffering more than the other girls are.
Yang Minhye laughed as she squinted at a picture of a baby Sohwa being held by Yeonhwa, "you look like a cute doll!" Minhye joked as she held the dusty old Baek photo album.
Sohwa and Ayeon were sat next to Minhye, they looked shocked as they remembered how Yeonhwa called Sohwa her doll and treated her as such. The girls were hanging out at Sohwa's house having just finished studying.
Sohwa pushed those bad memories away and quickly said "unnie I wasn't cute as a baby I had wrinkles on my forehead and made ugly expressions!". "It's the first time I've looked through this photo album I found it in the attic".
Ayeon smirked "I think you look charming as a baby" Ayeon turned the page on the photo album and was surprised to see a girl who looked like herself in a picture with Yeonhwa.
"This girl looks just like you Ayeon but she has yellow eyes and she's holding my unnie it looks like Yeonhwa was around 4 years old in this picture" Sohwa remarked "I wonder who she is? maybe it's time I visited my unnie and asked her why she assaulted me, if she regrets it now and maybe I could ask her about the picture too ".
"Are you sure your ready for that Sohwa?" Minhye said worriedly "your sister is ...well crazy who knows what she may do if you try visit her, you said she enjoys hurting people so that's why she assaulted you". "also you have been looking a little pale and sickly lately and you said you've been feeling tired lately maybe you should rest some more before thinking about visiting your sister".
"I guess looking pale and sickly runs in the family" Sohwa whispered as she felt faint and held her hand to her head as her vision blurred.
"SOHWA!" Minhye and Ayeon screamed as Sowha collapsed to the floor.
