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So, I'm on a roll today! I fixed chapter six, wrote and posted chapter seven, and wrote this! This isn't my best work -I don't even like this that much- but I thought it was worth posting, so...

Warning: Shohen-ai, crazy Naruto, bad writing?

Disclamor: Dude...if I owned Naruto, would I seriously be writing this, instead of making more manga chapters? Think about it...

Author: Obsessive


I love you. Its true, but even as I think this, I can see you clearly, standing in front of me. You're shaking your head, with a smirk so heart-achingly sad on your pale face, and saying "Don't say things like that, Dobe. Lies like that can hurt people." I want to shake my head, to tell you how true it is, to kiss you, but as I reach me had out you disappear in a wispy cloud, though your voice still echoes in my head.

"Dobe, don't think I can't see through you. You don't mean it. You could never love me." Your voice is dull and I can hear pain slicing through. You reappear again, just next to me, standing by my bed, perfect as ever.

"Don't go." My voice is barely above a whisper, but you must hear it because that sad smile comes back in place of the blankness. Then, to my horror, your body starts to fade.

"Wait! Don't go!" My voice gets louder with every syllable, just as you get fainter. I continued to call out, getting more and more hysteric, as I watch you become completely transparent.

"PLEASE! SASUKE! DON'T LEAVE!" Tears are brimming in my eyes, and you reach up to stroke my cheek before disappearing completely. I stare where your head used to be for another moment, then break down.

Six years of tears come out at once. There's a tear for every spar we had, every battle we fought, every memory we made. A minutes worth of tears for Haku's fight, five minutes for the Valley, and an hour's for all the encounters since. The rest are for you, just you and me, and the life we could have had, because even through all the insults, all the injuries, all the pain, one thing has never changed: the fact that I love you.


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