I just ranodmly felt like making a fanfic like this... though if any one wants to beta or anything like that...can ya? if not.. can you give help on what I should improve on? (is too shy to ask for a beta)
Chapter I
"Take this!" I yelled as I struck the final blow on the Ethereal Queen. "Jack..." she said as was starting to fade away. "As an award for defeating me...I shall give you two gifts..." The fading halted, she startared to float upwards and glow. "I bestow upon you my power..." the Light that made her glow came out from her and started to float in a white celestial ball, the Ethereal Queen looked human now. No more butterfly like wings, green demonic eyes replaced with beautiful jade eyes, ears looking less pointy, and no more heavenly angel halo to be seen. "Next I shall give thee a second chance..." The glowing ball then flew in me. "auughh..." I yelled as I was hit the stomace with the glowing ball.
Pain, It was all I felt. "Good you are started to begin the transformation..." she said as she walked up to me. "Now I can rest...Good luck Jack..." she said as she collasped in front of me. I ignored the pain and crawled up to her. "Ethereal Queen... are.. you alright?" I managed to say between the fits of pain. "Jack..." Her hand lifted up to caress my face. "My name... Is Felicity..." I felt her hand go limp, Her body just faded away into the darkness.
My body felt as if my skin was peeling off and soon my sight was growing darker.
"ahhhhh!" I yelled as I was falling into the ever lasting darkness. "no...no... It cannot end here!" I yelled in my head wincing as I was expecting to fall into the pile of darkeness. I opened my eyes to see my a mirrioes surrounding me. I looked into one of them, my image was way diffrent then how I always looked.
My eyes looked same but they were a demonic red instead of my redish brown eyes. "Whoa..." I went closer to the mirror. I looked once more. I had glowing orange-ish yellow-ish and red-ish translucent wings that looked very simular to the light elves, but I hard more wings, and translucent feathers floated down, fading into nothingness. (err think Zelos's wings from tales of symphonia...) Even my ears were slightly pointed.
And wrapped around my arm down to the hand was a vine, I vavuely wondered why it was there, I then decided to image it turn into a sword. (err think Keldy from dawn of mana)
Which it did which surprised me. I soon image it turning into an spear. It turned into certain things on what I wanted to after toying with it for awhile. I soon found my self falling once more, I was falling for the darkness.
"Ahhh!" I yelled as I fell off my bed. "Wh-where am I?" I looked around and saw my old room where I used to live before going to Radiata. "It was just a dream?" I wondered to myself. I got up and walked to the door only to trip on a box. "What the!?" I picked my self up and exmined the box, it has a note on the top saying. "Congradulations for defeating the Ethereal Queen! Here's a present from me -Lenneth..." then at the cornner it says "P.S. call on me when ever you need help! For ever waiting for you to join me heaven - Lenneth" I laughed, She's always asking me that question everytime I see her.
I put down the note and opened the box. Inside was very cute looking turtle. It had a note attatched to it's back. all the while it just gave me the cutest look ever. I sighed as I look the note that was taped on it's back. "This is a special turtle, He can increse his size and fly. Useful for getting place to place when not using a pig statue. He is also able to aid you in battle. Have fun naming him!" I looked back to the turtle, this time taking in it's features.
The turtle's skin color had been yellow, it schell color had been a light green... kinda normal atleast. It's shell's tiles had a lighter green star on it. "um... what to name you?" I looked back to the turtle. "nyaa?" It perked it head to the side cutely. I sighed again. "JACK RUSSEL!" was heard as some one slammed open my door. "wha-" I said as I turned around to see my sister have a furious look. "Oh hi Adele" I said going back to stairing at the turle. "Don't Hi Adele me! You need to hurry up and get dressed for the kight trials!" She then thew a bunch of clothing at my face. "Kight trials?" I asked. "Don't tell me you forgot?!" I then spent the rest od the moringing gettings scolded and then was kicked out. "To Radiata I guess..." I said to no one.
"Hey turtle... I think I found out the perfect name for you... I'll call you Staru!" I smiled as the turtle on my arm 'nya'ed happly. "Hang on tight Staru!" I then kicked the pig statue. It transported me to Radiata. "Woo! now I have alot of time to spare for running around Radiata for awhile.
after I entered the city I decided to go to the Theater Vancoor square. When I did reach my destination I say a little blue haired boy crying. "Oh it Cody! what's he crying about? did he loose his mom again?" I wondered. I felt Staru fly off my arm and fly infront of Cody's face, doing small tricks to cheer him up. I smiled and walked up to Cody, I bent down on my knee so I was at height with him. "Hey are you alright?" I ask. He hestantly nodded. "Want me to help you find her?" I asked as I offered my hand. He looked up into my eys and then took my hand.
"Hey Staru! Wanna grow big?" I winked at Staru, he obviously got my hint. Staru then grew to a size where Cody could sit comfortably on. "Here!" I lifted up Cody and sitted him onto Staru. "Okay hold on good! Let go!" I said as we ran off into the depths of the town to find Rynka.
"Hey excuse me! Do know a mother called Rynka?" I asked a purple haird lady, obviously knowing it's Rynka. "Who asks?" she sneered at me only to give a surprised looked when she saw her son on s giant flying turle. "Cody!" she yelled. "So I take it he is yours then." I then gave her a smile. "Hey Staru!" I yelled while Staru nodded then flew over to me. I lifted Cody from Staru and put him on the ground. I turned around to see
Rynka's left eye twitch. "What did you do to Cody!?" she took out a weapon. "I didn't do nothing!" I jumped onto Staru's back. "Hey don't run away!" She then leaped up in the air to attack. "Later!" I flew off on Staru's back to the castle, Radiata.
when I arrived there I opened the door, I saw a bunch of people I know signing up for the knight exam. I steped into the line, when I reached the front I regestered myself.
"Name: Jack
Russel
Age: 16
Weapon: Sword"
It took me awhile to actually fill out everything, including thing like
"If I die then Radiata castle is not to be blamed in anyway or form"
I had to sign my name on lots of papers. when I did finish I was told to go wait in the waiting room.
An hour lather they had everything organised and ready. "Would Pual and Star please arena?" Paul was about to enter threw the door but Star pushed him aside so he would get in first. I sighed, I already knew what was going to happen. the next few seconds Paul came out looking victoryious, while Star on the other hand came out knocked out.
"would the next contestants step in please?" I got up and walked to the arena.
When I saw Ridley walk in I decided to introduce myself. "Hi! I'm Jack Russel! who ever wins this will old no grudges okay?" I offer my hand out. Instead of shaking hand just just nodded and hmpthed. "BEGIN!" Junzaburo said as he ran away to make sure he didn't get cought up in the fight.
"Hya!" She left up into the air, bring down her axe. I moved to the side easly dodging her blow.
Using the hilt of my blade I struck her in the stomache. I think I did it a little to hard because when she got up she staggered for a second.
"Sorry! I'm trying my best not to hurt you!" I yelled, instantly thinking that she may have though that I'm going easy on her becayse she's a girl.
"Ha!" She swang the axe side ways I blocked it with my sword, feeling the vibrations channeling though the sword to me.
She then tried to bring her legg to kick me while I blocked her axe.
I jumped back quickly narrowly dodging a strike from the axe and kick.
"Whoa your really pulling out all the stops!" I yelled with a smile.
"Enough defence for me! I'm going on the offence!" I yelled again as I ran toward her, enjoying the wind blowing in my hair.
"Haaa!" I started with a left sided slar then a right sided slash, she narrowly dodged both. Jumping backwards. "hiiiyaa!" I leaped up and brung down my sword. She once again narrowly dodged, My sword was lodged into the ground, around where it was lodged there were tiny little cracks.
I looked towards her too see her left eye slightly twitch at the cracks.
"Ah oh!" I yeleld as I tried to get my sword un lodged in the ground.
I looked as Ridley slapped her cheeks, and then began to prep her axe for her special attack. "WILD PITCH!"
"Damn damn damn damn damn damn DAMN!" I yeleld in my head as I imaged the vine I dreamed about on my arm and to my surprise it was growing from the palm of my hand all the way to my shoulder! I instantly remembered how to work the vine. I imaged a barrier covering me with the plant's vine and leaves.
"Alright!" I heard Ridley yell in excitement, probley hope I had died or was atleast knocked out and badly injuried.
When the smoke cleared all you saw was a ball of vines and leaves covering my area. The vives and leaves retracted back into the palm of my hand. "How that for my Ultimate defence!" I smiled, I then turned my vives into a sword. "Haa!" I was about to deal the last blow but I some how tripped and my face went flying into a wall.
"Damn it!" I yelled as everything went dark. I could feel every one watching this fight sweatdrop.
End
rarw done with the story D until next chapter later!
