Hey hey right will tell you now this story is going to be awesome. I already have thought out to chapter 15 so it will be decently long. Maybe 27-35 chapters long. I hate those small one. they are just short and to the point no fun or pazaz. Well enough of me let's get to the story.

Jack's POV

"Thank you for having me at your dojo. I really appreciated it. Good bye LA fire ring dojo" I said as I left.

i forgot to tell you who I am. My name is Jack Brewer. I am a 7th degree black belt in karate and am mastered in jujitsu, MMA, and ti-quan-do(don't know how to spell it). I grew up in Seaford until I gears spotted by an agency. I then moved and left all my friends. And Kim. Oh I can't go a day without thinking about her. She was my first crush and when ever I hear her name it gives me a gitty feeling.

I bet se hates me now. I left her while her dad was in the hospital. And her grades were dropping to a A- average. I left her when all she needed was a friend. But I am going back to wear that all began. I am going back to Seaford for a gig at a new Karate dojo that opened up about three years after I left. I am now 18 and Kim is still 17. I am older than her by 5 months. i hope I can see her again.

"Flight attendance please make sure your seatbelt is buckled and your devises are off. Thank you" it said over the intercom. I let out a sigh and fell asleep.

i woke up with someone tapping my shoulder. It was a flight attendant. she said it was time to go so I grabbed my stuff and headed to the only place I remember full out. The strip mall where the dojo was.

I walked it a d can still smell the greasy ovenI at captain corn dogs and folafal Phils. I e turned around to see the dojo. Inside there is Eddie, Jerry, and Milton practicing. Looks like in three years they went from orange belts to purple belts. Then a saw Rudy he was growing old. You could see his goté was working for him. I walked in.

"Hey remember me" I said. They all turned there heads. They gasped and wan towards me screaming Jack. I laughed and hugged them back. There was only one thing missing. Her.

"Yo dude why you back. We missed u." Jerry said

"yeah we did. What's up" Eddie said.

"... Ahh...uhhh.." Milton said.

I laughed and told then how I was. " I am great. I have gig here at that new dojo. I wanted to stop by and see all my old guys. Speaking of old, Rudy ummm what's up with a facial hair and the ring on your finger" I said. One laughed and replied.

"We'll jack a am now married to your old health teacher Mrs. Applebottom who is now mrs. Rudy's wife. And the facial thing. I am growin it out" he said while rubbing his little fuzz under his lip. I chuckled and said ok.

"well isn't there one person missing from our little gang. Where's Kim?" I said. They started mumbling and I couldn't understand until Milton started talking.

"You see jack, Kim still goes here, but she has changed. when you left only about a month later her dad died. He was in the hospital remember?" I nodded and he continued. " we'll she has been distant to all of us and doesn't talk as much. Her clothes are now jackets and faded skinny jeans and she quit cheer. Her grades have dropped to a B- average and she doesn't seen to care." I felt a pang of gilt hit me in my chest. All I could think was this was my fault.

Just the. The door opened and a tall blonde came in she looked straight. At me and my heart stopped when so saw her. A smile came over her face.

"Jack!" She yelled. She ran up to me and hugged me, wrapping her legs around my waits. I sighed in relief. I said one more thing.

"Yes Kim, I'm here."

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