Author note (Spectre): Before we get started I have to say something a long time ago I made a very small thing of a story the reason was that something went wrong with my computer causing me to lose the files. Instead of continuing the story and starting all over I'm just going to change the story in a way that I think might be better, I also deleted the old story well that's all let's get started.
Commander Twilight Sparkle was Earthborn, she lived in an average home along with her parents. When she grew to an appropriate age she joined the Alliance military, she passed all tests in knowledge but lacked in melee combat and weapon skills. Many believed she should have been kept away from the field but soon she proved them wrong by showing her skills in magic. She then after some time was promoted to commander, she now serves aboard the SSV Normandy under the command of Princess Celestia.
Commander Sparkle was staring out a window onboard the SSV Normandy, she was gazing at Earth from orbit. She continued to imagine metropolitan Earth below the space age buildings, the people, and all the advances in technology. She then saw her reflection in the glass she still had a lavender coat. Her eyes were violet, her hair was also violet with a pink strand of hair next to a lighter purple strand, both of these hairs were next to her horn. She was snapped from her trance when the ship intercom turned on the voice of the ship's pilot Derpy Hooves could then be heard "Commander Twilight Sparkle please report to the ship cockpit."
Twilight then walked toward the cockpit seeing a salute from her crew of both human and equine members as she entered the cockpit she saw the back of Derpy's chair, alongside Derpy was L.T Kaden Alenko.
Derpy then spoke without turning around "Nice to see you Commander the princess wanted me to give you a report on our relay jump" "What relay jump" "This one" The ship was then shot into the darkness of space leaving a trail blue. "So commander ever been in a relay jump before" Twilight was on the floor "Not while standing" Kaden then looked behind him "You'll get used to it." Twilight then got to her hooves "Can you please turn around Derpy?" Derpy then spun her chair around to look at Twilight, she then jumped back at the sight "Your eyes their…" "Crossed I know my front hooves also sometimes stop working" "I'm sorry" "There is no need to apologize I get that response a lot."
Twilight examined Derpy her coat was a light gray, her eyes were a dark yellow, and her mane was the color blonde. "Are you a pegasus" "Yes I am" Derpy then spread her wings "Not to be rude but isn't it hard for a pegasus to fly a ship" "Nope I can tell you that I got an above average grade for flying" "How above" "They needed another paper to fill." "Impressive may I have the report now" "The jump went amazing" "Is that all" "Yes" "Thank you Derpy."
"Your welcome commander if you don't mind me asking how long have you been on this ship" "I got on yesterday" "Interesting the princess said she can meet you in the briefing room" "Goodbye Derpy and Kaden" The two waved to Twilight as she walked to the command room, before she could go inside she was stopped. She examined the woman judging by her similarity to one of the files Twilight read she was Dr. Chakwas "You're the new commander?" "Yes my name is Twilight Sparkle" "I would like your permission to check your health" "Of course" Twilight saw the doctor's omni tool wave over her "Thank you commander" Chakwas then walked away.
Twilight walked inside the briefing room, she saw a tall turian wearing black and red armor standing next to princess Celestia. "Excuse me I have to go" The turian then left the room leaving Twilight and Celestia. "You wanted to see me" "I did we have to go to a colony called Eden prime" "Why."
"We got a transmission from there it looked bad, I need you to take a team with you and see what's happening." "Of course princess" Twilight then began to leave "And Twilight be careful we don't know what's down there." "I will" Twilight exited the room to prepare for the mission.
Spectre: Well there it is a world where instead of just humans being on earth the two species lived together. Ponies are the only ones who can use magic but other species can replicate the same thing using biotics. Thought it was a good chapter thanks found a few errors then please post a review so I can get better. thanks for reading, or you may have just skipped to the bottom if you skipped to the bottom go back and read it.
