Please note that I don't own any characters in this fanfic, just the story. I would appreciate it if people would reveiw it and tell me how my writing is. This is my first fic that I've posted, and I want to know whether to give up and just read or continue to write

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Erde Kaiser Force- Chapter 1: Intoduction pt 1

"You may be wondering why I brought you here. It is to pilot the most powerful robot ever created: Erde Kaiser to promote peace, justice, and courage! What do you say?" The old man turned to look at a dude with weird clothes and a bandana, a man with a red trenchcoat, a man in a green sweatsuit with a muchroom cut, and a girl in weird clothes with long yellow hair and a flat chest.

The guy with the stupid bandana walked up and said "I'm in. I don't know about you, but I fight to provide peace and justice to all citizens, for I am the Great Saiyaman!" He then proceeded to crouch down and point and his own head with a weird pose.

A man in a red coat turned and started to leave. "I'm out. I don't like fighting." Suddenly a cage appeared around him with half a dozen chain guns pointed at him.

"I'm sorry, but "no" is not an acceptable answer. You will pilot Erde Kaiser." The old professor laughed maniacally.

"I'm in! I want to show the world what my beautiful self can do! No villain can defeat the Green Beast of Konoha!" The guy with the mushroom cut then proceeded to do his patented "nice-guy" pose, blinding the others with his shiny teeth.

The girl smiled and started to walk forward. "I think this is a great idea. Love and justice is…" She then tripped and fell, her weapons, chakrams, falling out of her clothes. "Owww……"

The professor looked at his volunteers and captive, then grinned. "Lets now get on with the introductions….."

Before reading the next chapter if its up, can anyone guess who the characters are?