This is my first fanfic so I hope its good and please review because I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to get feedback telling me if they like my story because I just want to know if I should carry on this story!

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto but if I did then certain things would already be happening in the manga but I won't mention those because then youwould have a full blown rant on your hands...

Anyway on with the story!


A small child squatted in a dark alleyway his bright blone hair so caked in dirt and grime that it no longer shone like it used to, his clothes were in tatters and his shoes no longer existed. They were so worn and overused from all the running he had to put up with that the soles had eventually peeled away. His once beautiful blue eyes were glazed over and empty, one glance at this child could tell you that he had experienced far more than any child, no any person, should ever have to experience.

The childs name was Naruto but he had almost completly forgotten his name because no one ever called him that, the villagers called him a monster, a killer and a demon fox. Every time Naruto had tried to approach their childern asking to play we was beaten to a pulp and spit on for asking them for such a luxury. They let him live, shouldn't that be enough for a monster?

When Naruto was around others he kept a smile on his face even when he was abused and tormented he never stopped smiling becasue of what someone had once told him. It was a boy that, in the space of a few days had become the best friend he had ever known. Naruto couldnt remember his face or even his name but he was like a brother to Naruto.

He had told the blonde that he should always smile because his smile could light up a room, it could bring a man to tears and it could win anyones heart. So Naruto smiled at the cruel adults that attacked him because he hoped that one day the boy would return to help him.

'He will come to save me' Naruto chnated in his head over and over even as the rain started to pour on the dismal town of Konoha.

Little did he know that his saviour would come but it would take him a long time to get there...


Ok that is the end of the first chapter hope you liked it and I know its short but thats only because I did this as more of a test, is no one reads it or reviews saying they want me to carry on I won't... So pleeeeaaaaassse review!