(These is my first story.^^ Talk me what you think of it.)

TMNT The Mystery Girl!

A girl cry from a dark alley "Why me?" crying girl said.

A guy come trade her to see her better did he pull out a knife then he cut her arm. "Ahaha!" She screamed from the pain of the cut wound. Did he laugh at her. The girl cry's from the cuts he made. She try to get away by not get any more wounds what she had. But she got cut five more time and now she lost more blood than before from the anther cuts and some are deeper. "What you want from me? Why is this happened to me?" whimper girl said. She fell down and try to crawl to the conner. "Hey, guys did you hear that?" Mikey asking. "Yeah, I think it was a girl scream and I think she in trouble." Raph said. "We have to go help her right Leo." Donnie said. They going to look at Leo but he was gone already. "Leo gone." Mikey said. "We better go now and help him." Raph said. "Yeah!" Donnie said. And they went and mean would. The guy with the knife was about to kill her until some shadow knocke the knife out of his hand and him out too. "Are you okay?" some guy asked. "Man Leo you could have save some fighting." Raph said. "Theirs was one man." Mikey said. She is able to change her eyes to see better from the blood lost and she see what he is did she start to faith. He trued around not say anything to his brother to see how is she but he see she is not. She is really badly hurt did he see her eyes are different for a second then truly back to normal. "Don't pass out yet. Donnie get down here quick." Leo said. She keep losing blood Donnie try to stop the bleeding the best he can. "We need to take her back to the layer quickly. Mikey I need you to go get April for me ok." Donnie said. "Get it!" Mikey said. Mikey leave quickly. One of them pick her up to carry her back to the layer quickly.